Hell to Pay (Blood for Soul #1)

by Syr456

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Contemporary Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Strong Lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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What if you were hunted by the gods, doomed to be thrown in Hell to rot...


First rule of being a fugitive for a crime you didn’t willingly commit: trust no one. Second: humans, demons, and heavenly-beings are assholes. Third, if I have to hear another goddamn pop song, I’ll lose my mind. 
A demigod nowadays is a complete joke. Hell, I bet even sorcerers, witches, and fairies are taken more seriously than me. 
When you’re on the run from the gods, paranoia becomes the only friend that you need. 
I wonder if my goddess friend can actually be trusted. Beer....I need a beer. 

An action and urban fantasy novel. 

Edited by M. Smith.

 If you've read Jim Butcher's Dresden files, Iron Druid Chronicles (Kevin Hearne), or urban fantasy in general, expect that.

Full book on Amazon:  HERE

 (The release schedule will be mostly daily. You will also get book 2 as well)

[This is a book for people who like to see main characters change, evolve, maybe become a better person.]

Missing tags  [Urban Fantasy. Realistic fiction. MC Evolution.]

 

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BoredNerdBooks
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This is a fairly good Fic.  The characters are interesting, the grammer is good, and the plot, while hard to read sometimes due to the corruption of justice used to attack the mc, is still pretty good. (I mean that it's hard to read due to its subject matter, not because it's badly written)

The only reasons I can think of as to why this isn't a more popular story, are:

1.  the plot thing I mentioned above

2. He stars out in hell

3. In the beginning, he is kinda a villain. (This changes pretty quickly)

So pretty much it's a good fic, but the some people are turned away by the subject matter.

Note: there's (at least not yet) not any particularly gory scenes( with an exeption to the gore a bit in the begining)

Also, the summery could do to be rewritten as it's not particularly good at portraying whats actually in the fic.

Daoist_Everhope
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sad boomer beats himself off onto a page.