Monstrous

The mind of a man in the body of a monster. 

Not the most unique concept, but so far it has been much better than it's predecessors on this site. 

You can see the main character obviously struggeling with his new body, surroundings and situation all the while clinging to his past existence. All this takes place in a world full of horrendous looking beasts much like our mc.

I don't know where it will go from here, which is honestly half the fun for me.

The story is well written and has good grammer too, so i suggest you read it right now!

I Love this book so far. Be warned it is dark, the humans here enslave sometimes sentient creatures to survive. The wild is full of monsters, etc.

The book is fairly early in its development, but so far I'm already getting a sense of personality from the main character. Which direction his character will turn personality wise will probably be determined when he gets a break from the constant fighting and can relax a bit.

I haven't noticed any significant grammar issues.

The style seems good, it feels like you are embedded in the main characters head.

The story is still too new to say what the plot is like.

Overall, I enjoyed the book so far a great deal.

Hard to find a dark gritty monster reincarnation nowadays, so I'm glad I was able to discover this jem.

Do check this story out at least.

Rip and Tear, Gough and Eviscirate until it is done.

 i really like it :) the idea is good the main character feels alive as does the world keep it up please :D

This is actually good ! Came in expecting nothing, left wanting more. Keep it up.

This is a story about someone reincarnating as a monster. And the author goes out of their way to make said monster body monstrous. This comes with split personality, cannibalism, soul eating and tentacles. There's gore pretty much every chapter.

Which is imho the weakness of this story. The world is potentially interesting, but I kind really find it in myself to care for all the pointless gore porn. Like how many eviscerations do you need until it gets boring?

It's a bit like the author has a checklist for that kind of thing to go through. Please mark your story as grim-dark or horror and don't advertise with Pokemon. Because this is about a little horror spawning in a horror deathworld where some people manage to enslave horrors and others become horrors.