Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Harem

Re-make of a fiction made by me three years ago. Please enjoy.

 

The story of gods favorite errand boy and his latest adventure.

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IILesGeMeAuxII
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A nice start and a nice plot. Author needs to focus on structure, grammar, and general flow of events. The characters seem interesting enough despite the lack of exact details. In my opinion, it is worth watching/helping the author grow and improve.

Morkin
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I like this story, it isn't anithing special, but it's still pretty good, but i wouldn't reccomend it to anybody. Why? Because it suffer of a mix short chapters (around 1000 words) and slow releases (a chapter every month if you are really lucky) that will make sure that both you and the author are going to die of old age before the end of this novel