The New Journey of an Old Soul

by Vihyungrang

Original COMPLETED Action Drama Fantasy Romance Female Lead Gender Bender Reincarnation Strong Lead
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The story of a soul seeking new adventure in a new life. A secret wish to find some things he never really found in his old life. Will the universe have other ideas for him again? Warning: 18+ due to violence, language and sexual content Note: The story is complete. A/N: Since people seem to be skittish with the gender bender tag, I should probably mention that it does not play a particularily important part in the story. More in the beginning, less as the story goes on.

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Prologue - Facing Judgement ago
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jason_smith1984
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could have been even better

As for style  it was about average  so i see no obvious improvements there to be made 

 

As for the story : i have several  issues 

First you destroyed the new peaceful life too early 

Second skipped aspects that looked like it was gunna be interesting 

Third really  gods going against the jade palace  They would know their plot would definitely get found out by the jade palace as soon as she dies anyway . There is no way they could not know that.

 

As for grammer and spelling even though this is a finished story it has way too many errors in it though not as bad as the sword of souls  that i use an example of the worst of all out there but it comes closer than any others ive read ( if you sent this to a professional proofreader you would be able to publish it even with the other minor issue's 

 

The characters  are well thought out  there are not many books out there where i like all the characters  and this came close but that was only about their actions mentioned in the story part of this review 

 

Overall this could have been so much more you could have easily turned this into a book series but i guess you lost interest in it 

denkkar
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I'm a big fan of reincarnation stories so I'm a wee bit biased. With that said this story is quite solid with constantly moving goal posts (that's would be be the plot and the real and present danger). The main character may be OP wrt normal characters, but only slowly unlocks that power. The challenges continually grow in difficulty so it's a wash in the end. Characters are rather interesting all around. Never read a book with so much lesbianism going on. Not a bad thing though.

The most similar story to this one that I can think of would be any one of the stories written by Andur (also on Ryoal Road).

OrigSgtPepper
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I love everything about this

This is one of the best works on the site and it is finished :)

Folkensedai
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one of my favorite along with death march.

Great writing style, gives a lot of feelings !

The Drast
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A satisfying book with a really good ending

The book was really good and very satisfying. However it was not the best. But considering that this was a debut it was amazing.

Style 5/5

I personally love this type of style, the use of a point of view of a single person at a time but with third person. The humour was sufficient and appropriate. 

Story 4/5

The story and plot were amazing. However much of the earlier story had no major implications in the later parts of the story. While not everyone can be like J.K Rowling or Er Gen a small amount of barely noticeable things should be used to create a bit of suspense. This made the story slightly boring and were it not for the fact that I read the story after it was complete I might have abandoned the story in the middle. 

Grammar 4.5/5

There were few typos in the story but not too many.

Characters 4/5

The characters were all well thought out and planned. However due to most of the characters were slightly rigid. What I mean by this is that the characters barely had any change in their qualities. While this makes perfect sense due to the age of the memories of the characters it also makes the story slightly bland.

Overall 4/5

The story was very enjoyable. Especially considering that this is the first work of the author I think the author was amazing. The quality of the story was constantly improving as the story went on and the plot began to develop. In the end the book was very good.

Voltage
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This book was amazing and deserved all the time it took to read. I have no complaints and recommend to anyone that likes the genre.

wayfarer
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Not bad, amazing vocab

Good story, same sex relationship quite a turn off though, and the story isn’t so captivating that I’m willing to overlook this character quirk

 

Oh I really liked the song recommendation though, thanks for that

MisoDumplingSoup
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I adored this novel. Like really really loved it. Had a clear path the story followed, showing that the author actually did plan the story and had a,azing characters. Had my doubts about how the relashionships the MC had but most of them were done excellently. But one problem I had was how there was no female characters she met abeit one or two that was interested in males and felt like Yuri should be a tag here since it felt forced on most characters i dont mean the characters them selves but radther the theme or tag (Yuri) itself was forced on the story. Anyway thats the only thing that annoyed me otherwise plot, characters, readability and content were both enjoyable and excellent. Thank you author for letting me read such a great story i'll be reading your second novel and holding off on your latest novel till it has more chapters to it :)

Maetr
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Absolutely love it.

 This fiction is one of the few that has caught my eye since I first joined and I am absolutely hooked on it. I LOVE it. Try it out if you haven't already.

younglink098
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The story is good, just that I prefer if the MC is a male.