The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World

by Lucifer Vermillion

Original ONGOING Action Fantasy Mystery Sci-fi Female Lead High Fantasy Low Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead School Life Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Urban Fantasy

"PLEASE!!! I BEG OF YOU!!! Join the Imperial Knights Academy as a special student or else I will be fired!!!" 

After getting thrown with such a line, the 16-year-old human, Lucifer Nightwalker von Nightmare, who was living on an island with her little sister and magical pet-- was forced to compromise and attend the Imperial Knights Academy as a special student.

This is a story taking place in a sci-fi fantasy world.

This is definitely not the end, nor even the beginning-- as everything was tied with 'Fate'.

Author's note:

Dear readers, please don`t review or rate anything before the 3rd volume, but comments are gladly welcomed. I hope those who reviewed and rated can update soon after my 3rd volume.

  

Volume 2:

Currently in hold.

The Volume 1 and first 4 chapters of Volume 2 are actually preparations for the beginning of his first actual mission as a special student, most of your questions and doubts will be revealed on the fifth day (Volume 2 Chapter 5).

Better be aware of every bit of details in before entering Chapter 5.

 

Volume 1:

Re-editing. (Please wait for update).

Prologue Edited. (25.7.2019)

Chapter 1 Edited. (21.11.2019)

Chapter 2 Editied.

Chapter 3.1 in progress...

Sorry about the rest of Volume 1, will finish it as soon as possible.

 

Updates:

I`m also drawing my own illustrations too, I will be uploading it as soon as I`m done.

Chapter 1.1 Illustration done. (Link Below)

Cover page changed. (Persia Silverlight)

 

Feel free to comment anything you like, don't hold back. I will answer anything as long as I'm able to. 

 

Sincerely,

Lucifer Vermillion.

 

Artworks:

Lucifer Nightwalker von Nightmare

https://i.imgur.com/gMOK4Aa.png

Kuroyuki Shiroha

http://imgur.com/tvAuB5U

http://imgur.com/xcumwwo

http://imgur.com/oAfFmnd

https://imgur.com/2aPzFWK

https://imgur.com/nezJfDP (Newest)

Persia Silverlight

http://imgur.com/OpDyZXv

https://imgur.com/ZMtSgtf

Illustration:

Chapter 1.1 (https://imgur.com/eHaRzUz)

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Alex Vince
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Glaring flaws which should be fixed.

Hey guys first time writing a review.

For the author.

I am gonna state everything i find wrong with this novel hope you atleast give this a read and consider it a bit. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 I put alot of time in this review hope you atleast give it a read

YesorNo
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The MC needs an overhaul [updated]

Ok. I dropped the fic because the MC thinks with his lower half and the author's writing is quite jarring whenever I try to visualize it.

Case in point, the mc jumps down from a tree but doesn't even see what's going on at the base of the trunk. Only after he raises his head from his superhero landing does he take in the scene.

A girl tries to kill him and he's like she's too beautiful, can't hurt her. Nope. Stupid chauvinist. Can't relate.

The style, though, is quite nice with pauses and formatting used to bring the words to life.

[previous review version]

I'm leaving this without reading the fic... But I hate it when douchebags destroy budding worlds with 0.5 stars.

From the preface... It's clearly not the author's problem.

FrostPrism
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Not bad needs some work

The story has incorrect grammer throught out that needs to be fixed but otherwise it is not to bad and I'll keep reading.

Some hints though I fell like you are using ... a little to much to throughout your chapters. It might just be a person prefrence though

GriefTG
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Haven't even read it yet but reviewing it in spite

I don't like being ordered around and he tried to tell me to not review it until the 3rd volume. I'm not a complete monster though so I won't give it a half star rating so until I read it completely I'm giving it a 3 1/2.