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Dah Ork Life!
by Child of the Fence
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What do you get when you put the soul and mind of a lazy weeb who has managed to haul himself into a reasonably productive life, into the body of the most ferocious and savage species ever concieved by the mind of man? You get Dah Ork Life! Both Cunningly Brutal and Brutally Cunning, Felix strives to become the stronkest and killiest Ork that ever was, all the while struggling to find a proper balance between the wisdom of man and the ever encroaching fury and madness that permeates every aspect of Orkish life, all set in the most horrific and dystopian sci-fi fantasy universe ever dreamed up by the nightmares of man, the Warhammer 40k universe.
Born in a spaceship poised directly for one of the Bastions of the crumbling Imperium of Man, the planet of Armaggedon, Felix must strive to both survive, and cope with the necessities that come with his second chance at life. And he has no intent to squander his second chance at life, even at the cost of a tarnished and dirtied soul.
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Damn it royalroad preventing me from being top reviewer. The WAAAAAAGHHHH will continue unabated undefeated undenied unstoppable!!
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More than just fanfiction
The story shows great promise in using the world of WH40k, with appropriate world building and introduction for non-fans, as well up to now perfect accordance with established lore, to establish a new character, with the old cliched idea of reincarnation with previous knowledge. Up to now, this cliche is handled flawlessly. The human mind is trapped in the body of an Ork, with the proper amount of influence. It's not just a body swapped human, it is actually a fusion, with the MC having to resist and use his orkish qualities.
The style is functional. The ork accent is noticeable, but not unreadable. The formatting is great.
The grammar isn't flawless, and could certainly use some editing, but not to the degree that it would cause confusion or misunderstandings.
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nice zoggin story
WAAAAAAGHHH! as da orkiest ork boy 'ere dis reflektz da orkz da BEST... WAAAAGHHH!
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Pretty good quality.
I really really like how you make the characters what type of persones they make themselves feel and feel. You really make the characters feel real immersive to the reader too. So I am anticipating for the next update my friend :)
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Good start
It honestly seems fine cant really give you four or five stars as their is honestly not that many chapters. Keep up the chapters and I will change my score and give you a more detailed review. Sorry and good luck.
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A well done isekai or reincarnated fan-fiction.
It has very believable events, comedic at times, and very fun to read. But it's unfortunate (at least to me) that you abandon the story.
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languiage
i think you should fix the languiage and make them take in a normal way becaus it's very confusing
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Iiz gud ork stuf!
Main character is kind of a shitty person, but hey you sort of have to be to go so full ork
still hes shitty enough that if another ork took his head off i wouldnt be so upset, wich is fitting for a story about the most loveable and hateable fantasy and science fiction race
so yeh, is gud writin for dah orky way of lyf! For dah waaaggghhh!