Prerequisites for Greatness (RWBY)

by bor902

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Jaune always knew that being a hero meant going on adventures, sometimes very far from home. He just hadn't thought he would start so early, or so far. Sadly he wasn't high level enough to learn teleportation, nor did life have an easily accessible mount option. His own two legs and an occasional donkey would have to do. Medieval setting; gamer Jaune.

You don't need to know anything about the RWBY universe to read this.

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Intresting. No grammar or spelling errors I could see and very nice charecterization. Looking forward to more.

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 Good Plot, good grammar, great characters, my only coMcLain the wold be howorking the MC is going between heroic to ruthless all the time. Like he sometimes will do stuff which is like exTrevelyan selfless and the  5 secondso later he will be ruthless. I prefer our MC being a nice guy, but also practical and ruthless instead of naive like Mary is

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Highly Recommended - No need for RWBY background.

By far one of the best fictions I've read in awhile. Has litrpg elements but is more story driven than grind quests. 

Characters have flaws, hidden mysteries about them and behave rationally to their personality. Not 2D. No harem thus far. MC is not OP. Which means the writer has to work a bit to get him out of tricky scenarios. 

*Update. I felt like the the story lost its edge after he arrives in Brorusalem, similar to how Azarnith healer does once she joins the academy if you agree on that point. My review only applies to the content before that point.

Still, that's 250-300 pages of great content, so definitely read, and decide for yourself from there. 

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Nice to read. Interesting. Not too flawed. MC is not OP, no harem, no arrogant young masters, avoids academy and tournament arcs so far, I am enjoying it.

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Amazing story, Absolute GEM

Awesome direction and idea. I know you use the monsters from rwby, but everything else seems completely original. Comparing the first chapter to chapter 28 shows a growth in both style and depth of writing LOVE IT :) I’ll be waiting for more 

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Change the name of the characters

Can you change the name of the supporting characters so that they don't look too much like the main characters name. When i read the name Jaune  and Jain sometimes i get confused on who is the main character. When i read the names in my head they sound so similar it is I get even more confusing.

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really hate the last part when the MC is under the influence of the shitty demon deal. i mean its written and thought about very well, but it makes me sick to my stomach ...
so because my enjoyement suffered so much, I subtract half a star. hopefully that part will not be the biggest part of MCs story in the future. Then I will reverse my subtraction

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It's pretty good, no major issues with it, looks promising so far.

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Chapter quality getting worse and worse.By chapter 24 we get introduced to too much crap that has no relation to story at all.ANd put crossover tag with Harry Potter (alternate world whatever!?).

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This isn't a The Gamer/RWBY mashup but is overlaying gaming laws onto the RWBY world and having everyone follows it.

I've been hesitating to read this story because I was hesitant that it may be a "The games we play"(probably IMO the best The Gamer/RWBY Fanfiction) knock off or even influenced by it. However the People you see in Jaunes life that you never see in the show are quite different and the story gives off a different vibe from chapter one.

(Finnish review later)