Empathic capacity of a teaspoon

by bor902

Fan Fiction ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Secret Identity
Warning This fiction contains:
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Reincarnating with the gamer interface was all a part of the plan, being reborn as Ron Weasley not so much. It was something I could work with, sure. Magic is great! But as I would soon learn, it had the tendency of introducing a plethora of other issues.

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huffygame
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Don't judge a novel by the tag 'Fanfic'

The Fanfic Tag can cause some hesitancy in most readers.  Likely due to the sheer volume of them and the fact a large majority of them are rubbish.  I can say that this fanfic is actually well done.  It has just enough elements to keep you entertained by is not bogged down by the points of the original works plotlines.  Things are mentioned, but in such an amusing way.  The author just had the MC check on a plot event, the MC only did this to confirm that he himself was not reincarnated into some fanfic instead of the main timeline.  Highly amusing.

I think this author shows great promise and I look forward to this continuing or even further works from the author.

Riftar Pokemaster
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My heart hurts there's not enough chapters. Really hyped with the wand making... damn this is good and I NEED more 😢😢😢

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Winged Thing
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Better than the source material.

I'm biased, heavily so. Its not possible for me not to be when I enjoyed this story as much as I have. There are many things to improve on, little things mainly but in my humble opinion,  A/N uses the HP world to spin more interesting dialog, characters and plot than the source material. The system elements are tastefully minimalistic and serve to enhance rather than control the story, unlike some novels. (PS im scared my mobile browser will crash should I attempt to paragraph down, hence the wordsalad, apologies) I will be following this authors works henceforth as its rare to see quality like this. To anyone reading this, try the novel its worth your time. To the Author, thank you for the time and effort you've put into this story,  It made my day that much happier.

Hephaestus0
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currently good but the mc might go dark

I liked this story so far. It's however unclear where the story is going at this moment which is not always bad. There is however a risk that the mc is going to become all dark which would kind of ruin this story for me but that is up to the author.

oldest-git
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Entertaining, Inviting and just hands down grand!

First off, I began reading and I couldn’t  stop until I hit chapter 29 (the most recent chappy).

Long story short: Great Story, and Fan-Fic.

I haven’t read any other Potter fan-fics and the book series wasn’t my favourite; I always felt it was a bit too airy fairy and not enough grit and social realism.

BUT, I think this novel brings both to the series, and is not a glorified fan service novel either. Plus the author’s command over the English language makes it really readable and inviting.

So, may I humbly request MORE CHAPTERS QUICKLY..... please?

Litrpg lover
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Good story just has bad update speed since its once a week and will definitely at some point be delayed if not abandoned.

Ihateeverything
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it is really good with great grammar. i myself haven't realised any big mistakes yet. the story is captivating with it's own brand of witty humor. it has just the right amount of what seems to be a budding romance. the only reason i oly rewied 4.5 is that not evryone likes a reincarnation story, much less a harry potter yhemed one.

wheresJerZ
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Original main character, great development, and no 2-D main characters. Love the use of unexagerated time skips. Better magic system then original Harry Potter. Can’t wait for more, you have a lot of material to use as you continue.

maskedcerf
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the style is good, the flow of the story is impressive.

i didn't notice any grammar error (or at least my reading wasn't bothered by it)

well i can't realy mark the story yet since he used an existing universe but the romance and humor is well done (the story isn't axed on romance)

the characters are good enough (or even great when compared to some stories) they might not be really developed but it is still good enough.

 

so this story is a good read, the author wrote it at 16 but don't let it stop you from reading it since it is still quite impressive, the only thing i would suggest as a reviewer is to go over it to modify some things but i guess that the story is finished and it would mean re-writing it (i guess the author has other things to do)

so well an above average story.

Agasthenes
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Well it's a SI story, strong lead that trains since the beginning and outmindgames all the kids. If you like that and like hp you will like this story. If not you will haze this.