Empathic capacity of a teaspoon

by bor902

Fan Fiction HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead LitRPG Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Secret Identity
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Reincarnating with the gamer interface was all a part of the plan, being reborn as Ron Weasley not so much. It was something I could work with, sure. Magic is great! But as I would soon learn, it had the tendency of introducing a plethora of other issues.

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huffygame
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Don't judge a novel by the tag 'Fanfic'

The Fanfic Tag can cause some hesitancy in most readers.  Likely due to the sheer volume of them and the fact a large majority of them are rubbish.  I can say that this fanfic is actually well done.  It has just enough elements to keep you entertained by is not bogged down by the points of the original works plotlines.  Things are mentioned, but in such an amusing way.  The author just had the MC check on a plot event, the MC only did this to confirm that he himself was not reincarnated into some fanfic instead of the main timeline.  Highly amusing.

I think this author shows great promise and I look forward to this continuing or even further works from the author.

Riftar Pokemaster
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My heart hurts there's not enough chapters. Really hyped with the wand making... damn this is good and I NEED more 😢😢😢

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oldest-git
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Entertaining, Inviting and just hands down grand!

First off, I began reading and I couldn’t  stop until I hit chapter 29 (the most recent chappy).

Long story short: Great Story, and Fan-Fic.

I haven’t read any other Potter fan-fics and the book series wasn’t my favourite; I always felt it was a bit too airy fairy and not enough grit and social realism.

BUT, I think this novel brings both to the series, and is not a glorified fan service novel either. Plus the author’s command over the English language makes it really readable and inviting.

So, may I humbly request MORE CHAPTERS QUICKLY..... please?

Winged Thing
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Better than the source material.

I'm biased, heavily so. Its not possible for me not to be when I enjoyed this story as much as I have. There are many things to improve on, little things mainly but in my humble opinion,  A/N uses the HP world to spin more interesting dialog, characters and plot than the source material. The system elements are tastefully minimalistic and serve to enhance rather than control the story, unlike some novels. (PS im scared my mobile browser will crash should I attempt to paragraph down, hence the wordsalad, apologies) I will be following this authors works henceforth as its rare to see quality like this. To anyone reading this, try the novel its worth your time. To the Author, thank you for the time and effort you've put into this story,  It made my day that much happier.

PinkFrostedDonut
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Any story that is able to make me laugh out loud AND has semi-intelligent characters that take plausible actions has all my support

Nicholas Obviouslyfakelastnamebecauseprivacy
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4.5 stars. It's satisfying to read, with surprising quality, and few grammatical errors. There is a lack of overarching story, aside from "fuck with the plot" which drags the story down a bit. There's also the fact that there's no bad guy. No person to fight. The author has (in a message to me) said he plans to add an antagonist soon, so that will at least be fixed before the story devolves into a slog. The upload schedule is terrible (but I'm not taking off stars). I gave 4 stars. It didn't really bring anything new to the table, but it does something simple and it does it well.

konrad
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3 words: 

  • potter
  • good
  • fanfiction (is it 2 words 🙃 ?)

do I need say more ? A really good Harry Potter fan fiction and hopefully one that will not fall into oblivion like the rest...

Litrpg lover
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Good story just has bad update speed since its once a week and will definitely at some point be delayed if not abandoned.

TheSol31337
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This guy’s a good author. Hands down.

His writing will make you like,  nay want to be Ron Weasley and if that doesn’t get you to read this, then nothing... I mean, maybe the rest of this review will.

This story follows Ron Weasley one of the most looked down upon and belittled characters and makes him into a calculating, charismatic badass. Are there issues with it ideologically? Looking at it from a realistic direction? Yes. But it reads well. It reads very well. I was sucked into the story bor902 is writing, as if I had apparated into the story this talented mofo wrote when he was 16. And despite that, the characters don’t feel plain and one dimensional, even a good few of the minor ones feel alive. The romance though questionable morally, feels real, feels shippable, and gives you that sugary feeling that leaves you wanting more.  

This story doesn’t follow the boring 1-2-3 redundant, boring already told better by JKRowling story almost every other HP fanfic does. It tells a new one that is fun, exciting, and seeks to actually expand upon the world its set in in fun, hilarious, and exciting new ways. This story has been fucking fantastic so far and though I could potentially see storm clouds ahead that I may or may not like. As it stands I can firmly say this one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read and will continue to read from this day forth. Giving this the review and rating this shit deserves in order to better ensure that this author guy continues to deliver me the juice I need every Saturday for a long time to come.

Mark215
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i just want to say this is one of my abbsolute favorte fics there arent a lot of ron reborn or self inserts that arent givin up and i love the idea of a mad scientist using a divice to be reborn with his memories i love stories like this that are uniqe