Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Female Lead LitRPG Reincarnation Strategy
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In the vast grasslands, she sticks out as a little blue drake among the mostly human population. And with no idea of how she got there, she tries to find a place in this new world with monsters and magic

 

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Aspartame
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Highly enjoying this. Doesn't have an OP or Sad-sack MC. The MC is a child, which is a bit of a minus, but it's done well. No glaring spelling or grammar issues. It is LitRPG, if anyone is confused on that. It uses a Job based System as the base for the RPG stuff, but it hasn't been fully fleshed out to the reader as of yet. Looking forward to exploring that. Gear with stats has been mentioned, but doesn't appear to be common. The math aspects of LitRPG are a vital part of the story, without using the system itself as a narrator or bludgeoning the reader with it. All-in-all, an A+ all around. This is good stuff, and I hope to see much more of it. (edit) aaaand it's dead.

Kycomputer
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Solid opening chapter, nothing that really grabs me and says "You will read this until 3AM." stuff, but that said there are no errors that I can see that dissuade me from keeping this in my bookmarks like many other beginning stories. Characters have no issues, no huge tropes or shoehorned-in personalities or quirks. No grammar errors to really speak of for the average reader. I'm excited to see how this will evolve. This shows promise. (Review at Ch.1)

Luneder
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Really showing a lot of potential with a well-thought-out story progression. A lot of the writers on this site lose patients especially with this kind of MC and right away make the MC overpowered throwing it into huge battles or just destroy everything making the plot almost non-existent. Though still early I can tell the story wants to build a strong foundation first to build a solid character and world, the plot still is not visible yet which helps to make it less predictable.

I have bookmarked this novel for now in hopes that the potential I see does not let me down.