Virtually real

Virtually real

by bor902

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
 

The first virtual reality game heralds the end of Ergarth's leisurely lifestyle, yet it also reeks of opportunity.

 

Better adapt quickly, or you might just get left behind.

 
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I am reviewing this at chapter 2 and i really like this story. The grammar is great, i have not noticed any mistakes yet and no funny word usage. If the grammar in a story is bad it can be a deal breaker for me. While the story is not developed very much so far I am looking forward to more chapters. The fantasy/tolkien setting is a little overused, but with a little creativity on the part of the author and some worldbuilding layered in the story I think that this will be an interesting read and I hope that bor902 realeases more chapters. :)