Seti Tutt, a recent graduate of the university, was too weak as a wind adept to become anything amazing with his abilities. However, his sight was stolen and now has to learn how to see with his wind, ultimately landing him as a student at Prestige Academy where enemies abound.

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Almost-weekly every Monday.
The almost part of it just means I'll skip an update after several releases to catch up on the writing.

Story cover was commissioned by me.

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Codorniu
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story was dropped because author joined some sect or whatever, pls all rate it half a star so ppl dont start reading a story only to get disappointed

Keiex
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Stop Dropping Half Star Reviews

I'm too disappointed that the story is being dropped, but he dropping the story doesn't affect the quality of the work he already did.

KamiKira00
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Everything was good except MC

I dropped this novel after I finished reading 2nd chapter. MC just didn't make sense. Someone just messes with his mind, against his will and he almost thanks her.
Edit: I gave this novel a second chance, and I think I can understand MC choices.
I like this novel writing style, I didn't saw any grammar mistaces, chapters are long. Only bad thing is that beginning MC choices are not really explaind and feel forced so 4,5 stars for this.

KnaughtFermi
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It ends before it every truly takes off.

A story that had a strong start excellent writing and then is cancelled by surprise.

Srodek
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Dropped after few chapers

It was a good unique story but don't waste time on it - it was dropped after few chapters, now it's only blocking place on TRENDING FICTIONS. Early dropped stories should not show on trending and best rated lists

Solkim15
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I loved this book it was super engaging and I’m really glad you found Jesus and have felt enlightened and I could never give this a bad review for the phenomenal writing but I wanted to say in hope that you will read it that god is wonderful and ask a lot but I also know that you can show other people god through writing and I think instead of giving up writing you should find a way to put god into your writing but follow your beliefs man 

noctelibri
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 Wow, that's a heckuva disappointment if he dropped the story. Being new here, I was wondering how we know he dropped it and that it was because he became religious?

Oscar56
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It was infuriating enough to make me write this

Wanted to like this story but it’s just descended into something nonsensical. The authors constantly talking about morality and how the Mc’s trying find his morals, but in reality it’s just all these ‘wise’ men agreeing with the mc’s viewpoints. Anyone else is wrong, which will be shown by the author putting them into highly specific situations where the main character has made the ‘right choice’. There’s no real critical thinking, just the mc making plot choices and only giving small, incomplete explanations as to why he’s right. No real introspection, just a Mc having his sheltered little ideas of right and wrong and having the important characters agree with him, leaving no room for anyone with opposing ideas to have any importance or any support.

The finishing blow that made me drop this though was when the main character said something along the lines of “yes she was wrong” which is said so defiantly it shows the Mc believes without a doubt. The second you try and argue against someone’s viewpoint, not because it’s logic is flawed, but because you disagree with their methods and morals, using this line, you have no right to act as philosophically open-minded as the mc likes to act.

anyway aside from these minor details it’s a story with minor grammatical errors that uses the old ‘people have magical element and they manipulate it and there’s tiers magical system.” Plots good and aside from the infuriating characters, it would have been a solid story.