Seti Tutt, a recent graduate of the university, was too weak as a wind adept to become anything amazing with his abilities. However, his sight was stolen and now has to learn how to see with his wind, ultimately landing him as a student at Prestige Academy where enemies abound.

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Almost-weekly every Monday.
The almost part of it just means I'll skip an update after several releases to catch up on the writing.

Story cover was commissioned by me.

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FoxAndHound
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Possible new best rated?¿?¿

Wowsers

The world building is exquisitely crafted to be both fulfill twords the authors intention of creating a believable world with the added benefit of (imo) not being forced at all! The story has a flow that hasn't, and I doubt will, be matched for a while, all the while spinning a tall tale of magic (mancy) that can be imagined with very little effort.

There are already a lot of precursors twords possible future plot points and I honestly can't wait to see where this develops. I sincerely believe that we could have another fiction that could EASILY keep up with, if not surpassing, the top trending fictions on this site, such as Randidly Ghosthound and E.L.L.C.

Keep up the good work author, I'd love to see where you take this laughing

Edit: I've seen a bunch of people criticize the MC's thought process regarding the geas in the story but if you continue to read everything gets explained, you should give the book another go.

VelocityFlow
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This story deserves a spotlight

I have enjoyed every moment so far and I am highly anticipating more. The story has kept my attention through all 14 chapters that are currently out and I feel given time for more readers to find this story it will end up as one of the most popular stories on RRL.

Drivou
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It was going so good...

As others have reviewed, this story is a blast and would've easily became one of the top listers on this site. However, lo and behold, the author became enlightened and found writing to be a cardinal sin. I suppose this was another "could've been" that will remain lost forever. 

van
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IT'S COOL AND THE MC CAN BE BETTER WHICH IS FUN!

I love the story!

PROS: Creative way of using handicaps and underdog stories had always intrigued me, and this story has all that. All the characters have distinct personalities and their actions have consequences that have legitimate ripples affecting the world which gives a deeper sense of the world-building. Smooth reading from start to finish and the pacing is great!

So here's my review (mostly frustrations) based on my experience while reading your story, which I hope you wouldn't mind hearing.

First: The protagonist's motivations are all over the place.

Spoiler: Spoiler

Second: His background was wasted.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

So my point is, the story moves forward and every revelation is a great read...but don't forget your MC's core and background, since it could offer a lot on this kind of story, thematically, that is. The new MC is more exciting, yes, but the old one could make him more relatable. Kudos!

Vokivas
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A great story, but the author has left it for God. I'm not even kidding.

 

LordMars9873
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An elegant magic system, and an interesting world. This is one of the best I have read. The novel lacks the boring fluff but still makes the world interesting and clear. Read it if you enjoy any sort of modern magic novel. 

steamedbun
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i was blind but now i see

EDIT:Yes it was dropped. We are sad so just ignore those 1 star rating ppl are just mad because they really liked this novel. Author posted some more chapters on reddit and plot that he/she had planned.Enjoy.

https://www.reddit.com/r/rational/comments/97cyvw/aeromancer_info_released/

great story about a weak/overpowered wind mage MC .....and the mafia! the characters are all really cool....as someone aptly put, this is some good shit

Tel
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the author "found god"....sigh

Terrific story, unique, and wonderful.

Then adult "bible camp" IRL happened and the author decided  to close the story.....because they asked.

Let this be a lesson religion loves high pressure sales techniques. The hot bible babe, the ultimate wingman "bro", the attention of being in the center of the party....the life of the party.

It's a personality warping sucker punch to the ego.

If you find yourself in such a situation tell them you need some time alone. A month? Barely any time really at all. If they are honest and true they will back off for a month. If they are more concerned with the business of religion than the faith the hot bible babe is going to be calling for dates. The wingman "bro" guy time. The religious super friends....outings.

Faith is where you find it in the red dust, or the infinite.

People that tell you after barely know you "change your life for us".....Usually about as concerned with faith as a lobbiest writing targeted propoganda after downloading your facebook feed.

 

Aldross
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+ My heart was beating fast in chap 5! 

+ Easy to read and no apparent mistakes

- Few Chaps :(

humblepeasant
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"This story is dead."

"No, it was killed."

"Who did it?"

"Jesus, Jesus did it....."