Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Magic Male Lead Martial Arts School Life Secret Identity Super Heroes Urban Fantasy

Powers are determined by geographic birth locations, and only the rich and powerful are permitted access to prized sites. SC is the first person born in space.


The punishment for unauthorized births is death. Out of fear, SC keeps his strange abilities as his darkest secret. He pretends to be nothing more than a mere Regular while his peers develop unique powers, varying from controlling lightning to producing diamond hard skin. But when his mother is kidnapped by an unknown organization, SC has no choice but to act.


SC ventures into a school of talented students to learn to fight, where he must learn to master his powers without revealing their true nature. But soon he realizes that the school is more than it appears and that it may hold the secret to his missing mother. To rescue her, he will have to reveal powers never before seen in all of history.

Written by award winning author Leonard Petracci.

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Johnsontaiwo57
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The Story's just so boring, i have no reason to be invested in this story, it's so bland and boring.

I honestly don't care about the Main Character

I feel no tie to any of the characters in the story, the main character hasn't done anything interesting with his power...he hasn't adapted, grown or changed...

If anything he stagnated 

It's just so gosh darn boring 

 

Kikanolo
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Great Premise Squandered

This story has a great premise. The idea behind the world and story is excellent, and had the potential to craft an intruiging magic system  and solid plot.

 
Unfortunately, all of that was squandered by poor writing. The worst offender is the characters, specifically the main character. He's boring, makes stupid decisions, and its just not fun to read. 

Mutts
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I've read until chapter 40.

Story and style are okay, but it doesn't really draw you in either and could use at least some jokes in my opinion. Grammar is good though.  Characters are a bit flat and sometimes weird and I can't seem to care about the MC, he's just an average joe with a strong power. Not particularly kind, funny, smart, courageous or just anything, as average as can be. I do like some of the side characters though.

Reversity
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Looked promising, but at a certain point i just had to drop it. Change the tag btw this aint no school life, this is brain wash facility where they train obidient dogs fuck that noise. 

JBRhorst
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So... I liked the concept of this story up until the MC’s 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 Now I hate it. Still a good story, but it is just an overly used theme and I’ve read way too many stories like it. If you haven’t been jaded to that theme yet then you will probably be able to stomach more chapters than I could. 

Outside of my personal gripe, the story has an innovative plot, decent characters, and plausible motivations. The only really frustrating thing is a lack of measurable growth after 60+ chapters. 

matthewrbird
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kid is moderately intelligent.  makes poor decisions. but the sample i see here is about 2 1/2 to 3 stars.  

FlowerPothead
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I'm a follower on Reddit, and love it, so have some stars.

Check it out on Reddit, there are a lot more chapters there. SC has a very unique and interesting magic system, and the story is quite enjoyable.

Just give it a try.

Seth Jakill
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Another new bookmark

Great novel, with a potintial to have a bright future ahead. Reminds me a lot of the early Harry Potter  novels great for a YA audiace. It has yet to leave the others "Side Characters" out of the lime light which is the great failing of other novels of this type. 

I would like to see the others chapters moved over from reddit. 

On chapter 68

https://www.reddit.com/r/leoduhvinci/comments/6zswxr/star_child_part_68/

Alexis Keane
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Really nice premise, interesting to see how a whole world sprung up from a simple writing prompt. Whole thing was really well handled and co-ordinated. Occassional misspellings were present in the book, which was minorly annoying, but manageable. Wish the author would have said this was on amazon, since I prefer reading on a tablet :P

Kappa-sama
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Yes.

Characters are neat, grammar is  👌very nice, I personally enjoy the author's style - it is very unique, though. 

Uhhhhh
Story was nice, powers were nice, power system was nice, and I dunno. It was good.

I rate it a solid 30$ physical copy.
If you don't understand that, then I don't know what you're doing on a website about books.