Songs of Legacies: Cavaron [Complete Draft]

by Gyfera

Original COMPLETED Action Adventure Comedy Drama Fantasy Romance

Cavaron follows the story of a man as he travels worlds* or gets kidna-- er, summoned against his will on multiple occasions. As Cavaron travels or gets kidna-- summoned, we will see his fairly chaotic life. *Yes, WORLDS. As in many and not just one. Ever wonder what would happen if a summoned """"hero"""" gets kid-- summoned multiple times? Will they ever get tired of it? ***I re-read the first 16 chapters and figured I should rewrite it when I get a new PC. Yes, I'm not writing this on a PC, but on my mobile. Everything on mobile, so pardon the quality since my thumbs are bigger than the keys, and will be bound to have quite a lot of mistakes. ***Getting lazy to fix the first 16. If you want to PR them, PM me with your edits. ------------------ KaosChild is my previous name. I now go as, Gyfera.

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Chapter 13 - Ladenras Epilogue + Belfron Prologue ago
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Chapter 28 - Belfron End ago
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Chapter 29 - Memories Start ago
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Chapter 67 - Edeortha Finale/Epilogue ago
Chapter 68 - Terra (Earth) Prologue Rewrite ago
Chapter 69 Rewrite ago
Chapter 70 Rewrite ago
Chapter 71 Rewrite ago
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Psycho_Diver
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Ain't no rest for the wicked

This is a fun story.  The author puts out chapters of decent length.  The story is well written, the few minor grammar mistakes and errors in word choice issues don’t detract from the enjoyability.  Purposefully swithches between first and third person narative at times and maintains a distinct “voice” in each perspective.  If this were a book, I’d recommend buying it.

d3rrial
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Really enjoyed this so far. The repeated summoning allows to pack stories more densely and leaves no time for filler-chapters.

I do find it a bit strange however, that Cavaron's strenght seems to vary quite a bit.

johnangel
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Very interesting premise that reminds me  of Moorcock's eternal champion.
The grammar is fine much better that I'm used to.

For the author.
The story , world and characters need a little more description as things can get somewhat confusing.

Pyro1515
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Love this story....

Other than a few holes in the MC this story is awesome:)

Carson6319
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This pacing is on crack.

Reviewed at: Chapter 9

I cant say much about the story as I had to drop it. The pacing was just way too high for me. Seriously in just a few chapters there have been as many major events as most stories have in total. 

In 8 super story chapters we had main MC introduction, bandits, summoning to new world, introduction of a kingdom, the MC fighting a giant army and killing the king, the MC becoming rich, the kingdoms new queen being corinated, MC stopping an assasination attempt on the new queen, and the MC discovering the source of the said assasin followed up by him stopping them. Btw thats not all I just thought to points out the major events of 8 tiny chapters with most events being a few sentences long. 

Its like story points on crack.

fraulcruz
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Really really really Liking this!!

This is one great story!  I don’t care what anyone thinks about an OP MC, I just like this one!

I salute every authors on this site and this is one story that I really like. Although I’m not really cut out to give an advanced review (sorry I’m lazy :p ), I like the concept of getting summoned to multiple worlds. I hope for a better development with the story and more characters. Hopefully another “Love one” for Cavaron besides Aisha.

 

Overall I seriously recommend this story as it’s one of the few “Hidden Gems” here in RRL.

 

Kudos Gyfera! Keep it up! ?

Alsavir
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Good story so far, easy to read and with decent grammar. Would like for the characters to be made a bit more in depth, they feel kinda shallow, but it's not exagerated. Working a bit more on the character development should be a bit more in depth. 

 

In short keep up the good work.

PAYLESS
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Hi!! Are you not going to make Cavaron a little bit happy in his life?? All i read are maidens lost in love. Too bad for him. 

Dreamheart_Dragon
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Awesome, despite some confusion

I really liked the story and the main character, and I would have given it a five star if not for some confusion regarding the ending and other minor things throughout the story. 

random_bystander26
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its descent enough for a novel but i cant really say i enjoyed it ... i just cant find something that will make wow... or something that will attract readers ...  well this will do for pass time