Wild West Hero in the Land of the Robot Maids

by Velvet Canopy

Original COMPLETED Action Adventure Historical Sci-fi GameLit Gender Bender Non-Human lead Reincarnation Secret Identity Strong Lead Villainous Lead Virtual Reality
Warning This fiction contains:
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Hero Beaumont was one of Arizona's most notorious outlaws. He was a bank robber, a mass murderer, a horse thief, and more. Any crime you can commit, Hero Beaumont has most definitely done it. Everyone feared him and his gang of murderous lowlives. 

But then one day he dies and awakens in a body that definitely is not his. He has also awoken to a world that is vastly different from the rough, violent desert he had just departed. What can a simple gunman do in a world where nothing makes sense, and single mistaken step could lead you and the planet to oblivion?

Why, he'll do what he's always done. His very damned best. And when you're at the top Arizona's Most Wanted, well, your best is pretty damned impressive.

 Book Two is now available here.

 

TRIGGER WARNING: Features a Villain Protagonist, so expect violence, swearing, and lots of mean stuff to happen.

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shukaku7
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I was surpised by how much I got into the story from just the first few chapters.

The story is also well written so far.

tenaciouspfc
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I love a good old Wild West themed Outlaw as an MC. And our MC is that. He’s also a badass if the outlaw part didnt give it away. I was already drawn in by the first chap and found no mistakes so far

NeedzHelp
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Great Story Cant Wait for Part 2!

Really enjoyed the character and world development. Thanks a bunch for the story!

Peculiarflame86
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The Company's Baddest Man, always has a plan

This story, and as this review is occurring after having reading the sequel (also highly recommended) is an all star. For the simple fact that it adheres to believability at all times. 

Character got the full 5 because I have never once doubted the actions of the character's, nor the rationale behind said actions. They stay true to themselves and their beliefs.

Story. Listen, we both clicked on the title. You had to have some idea of what was gonna happen. And here we are, following our hero, Hero Beaumont, and his "older" values and morality. You get exactly what you came for and then some.

Style is actually a 6 because 

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 Grammar is 5 because it is. Pretty self explanatory at this point. When people are talking, its organic, unforced, actual dialogue.

Seriously, the only downside is sporadic updates, but with all the really great stories on here, not a real problem.

Pice
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This drew me in, it made my heart race. I felt something I haven’t felt in a long time. This is one of the only books I enjoyed. Not just read and had a good time, but enjoyed. You, my friend, are a genius.