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Leila Drake is a patrolwoman for the Berou of Psionic Investigation. When a couple of agents from the FBI come to ask her to go undercover using her unique skills, she agrees to the mission and sets events into motion that she has no control over. Raina O'Hara is a rookie FBI agent who was paired with Leila. What seemed to her to be a simple undercover operation, will soon destroy her worldview with revelations the likes of which she never imagined.

Authors note: This is my first fiction, constructive criticism is desired on everything from grammar to style and characterization.PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE 

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