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Matt cannot wait to play Livia. He followed the beta testers' streams. In doing so, he realized that in a world where anything was possible there might be a place for him. While most people were creating warriors, mages and paladins, Matt had a simplier dream. Adverse to things like pain and dying, he opted for a less dangerous route. Using magic to farm the land. Arriving in Tallrock, a frontier town on the newly discovered continent of Gogland, he sets out to live that dream. Carving a living out of the wild and untamed land.

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hornblower14
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A well thought out world, interesting characters, didn't get bogged down in backstory straight away, and a ton of ways the story can go. Only a few small grammer mistakes that didn't take away from the story at all, otherwise I have only good to say. There are few decent base/settlement stories on this site, and this is turning out to be one of the best I've seen. A favorite for sure!

(Review written after chapter 9, but these are super beefy, tasty chapters.)

Razinal
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Buy it when available.

This is a story meant to be sold on amazon and I am certain it'll make a lot of money for it's author if he writes as well as he's doing. 

Trighap
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Very much following this story!

I honesty feel crafting and city building does not receive the love it deserves in the litrp g genre.  So I am delighted to have stumbled upon this story and will be highly anticipat ing further chapters.  This story so far has developed quite well, with logical progression and theme development.  I very much like the main character and have high hopes for the main sidekick.  So, I hope the author feels motivated to continue this story, and also to perhaps consider going to the self-publishing route on Amazon so he can determine how successful his work can be.  Keep it up, dude, and write on!

flriley
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Really well done.  Great start to the series.  I love the LitRPG genre and you've got an interesting take on this field.  I love stories told from the everyman point of view.  It's why I like Nathan Lowell's books so much.  They are more slice of life than grand adventure.  Hope you don't OP your guy.

BubuGumpQ
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Love the story so far, can't wait for next chapter

Veritas97
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You're taking the story in a direction which I hope more litrpg writers are willing to try. So many litrpg stories make it to where a character makes constant combat their main method of progression. It sounds fun when you're doing it from behind a screen, but not something everyone would love doing constantly in what feels like or is a living breathing world. There are so many paths a person could choose besides an adventurer (some would love it but not all). You could be a politician, a crafter, a merchant, or in your case, a farmer. :D

mad-ness
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Nice new world-building, crafting litrpg

If any series was going to draw the author's attention away from Red Mage then this qualifies.

Still early on but the usual early chapter litrpg intro and infodump rate as well above average.  Definitely more interesting and attention keeping than most.

I like how so far it appears that the series can be carried by the crafting and character development aspects of the story so that the author doesn't have to rely upon contrived action plot elements to move the story forward but can instead use them when they seem to be best suited to the story.

MyNameWasStolen
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This is literally my dream story. I'm so happy that this is a thing.

The main character seems to actually be inteligent and has a plan of what he wants to do.

The world seems real with the way the people act and i forget it's a game until people have user names like "xxx420blazeitxxx" lol

Tekknos
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alittle more info needed i think skill wise, but its great other wise wish you would make faster and longer but thats what I say to everyone I like .lol ( 5 min. later ) then I read the next one and its going into the skills lol nvm

Suuhei
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Really really enjoyable!

I don't really write reviews but I truly felt like this desserved a review! 

 

The story is really well written and you can tell there was some tought put behind it! I really like how things are going even though you can pretty much guess what's gonna happen. It's a shame the chapters are only posted once a week as I think the author should deffo focus a bit more on this story.

The only thing i thought it was a bit forced was the pact his companion made after saw him crying for one of his kind. Personally thought it all fell into place a bit too well, but over all great story! Keep up the good work