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Shen is a young servant from an important family and he had managed to avoid the obligatory test to become a cultivator for five years.His life was already good enough and the world of cultivation was too harsh for him, who loved peace and did his best to avoid conflict.

However, his easygoing days came to an end when he became unable to avoid the test that year.

Shen soon learns that suffering is shared by humanity as a whole and he cannot escape that.

What is the cost of peace? How much is he willing to sacrifice for solitude? If he wants to achieve anything, he must get stronger and adapt.

Accompany Shen on his journey to become stronger and seek enlightenment.

Note: This story is undergoing a major revision. Thus far only chapters one to five are good to go.

I don't own the cover image. You can find the original here: https://www.deviantart.com/miuxu0602/art/Time-in-the-eyes-88849253

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