Faded Hours

Faded Hours

by Scira

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Since young, Shiki was born in a rich family .His family were a class of noble wizard as his siblings were born with powerful magic, Shiki rather acquired barely enough magic to cast a powerful spell. As a result his family pays no attention to him and all of his siblings think he was a failure. Shiki decided that he will live his own life by himself. He dreamed of becoming The Wizard Lord which was the ruler of mages at that time. But everything changed after Shiki met a fairy in the woods near his own home. Shiki is about to live a hell of a life.

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teijika
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The first two chapters were good. But conflicts rarely happen. The grammar needs something to be done, and i wasn't able to immerse myself.