A Taste for the Finer Things

A Taste for the Finer Things

by LordFraxinus

Original HIATUS Fantasy LitRPG
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Dave was shattered, emotionally and physically after a car accident destroyed his throat, and his dreams of being a singer. While in the recovery ward, an advertisement recommended vr as a place he'd still be able to sing. Excited he had the doctors make the call and put him in. Not planning to actually play much, he rushed through character creation, just asking for something that could sing and ignoring the warnings. It was only afterwards he realised he'd ended up as a monster. How does one balance the pursuit of fame and hiding ones actions? Find out in "A taste for the finer things"

 

This is based off an idea off the five minute synopsis I wrote in the RoyalRoadLegends Discord

Cover generously provided by Vsolon

https://royalroadl.com/fiction/18430/a-world-beyond

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The main character has a strong backstory, which sets up his conflicts for the stroz to come very well. The style is perfectly fine for a story like this. There are no problems I noticed with the grammar so far. It isn't perfect, but at no point did I need a sentence twice to understand it.