Heaven's Brush

Heaven's Brush

by Ausum

A world of martial arts only has room for the strong. So when a boy just wants to survive without it the backlash is not something he can stand alone.

To make matters worse he has no talent at all. Making him the walking trash of the world.

What will happen when he is picked up by a master who has him walk the path dedicated to the heavens?

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