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A soul of a man floats through endless darkness, awaiting its next reincarnation. The man remember nothing and knows little, but when his chance to reincarnate comes he will learn he has an abnormal amount of positive karma. Positive karma he can use to gain plenty of advantages in his next life. In fear of being powerless or becoming a pawn he makes full use of it, becoming someone who would surely leave a mark on the world he heads to. His destination? A world of ninja, shinobi. The world of Naruto.


I do no own Naruto nor anything else from the source material. This is only a fanfiction.

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TheBreakernew
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This fanFic is pretty good, it's not a cringe fest like a lot of these stories can be. The main character is nicely intergrated into "Naruto the show"'s pre-existing elements, and the story flows naturally. Plus, the grammar is good, which is always nice to see.

kao
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Time Line S instead of Time Line N

Narahuto. 

I see. It is a good fan fic. So far it's got very very minimal typo's. The plot so far seems to follow the original Naruto Time line, I will call that Line N, for Naruto. 

 

BUT....

 

Now...after chapter 14...I hope to start to see divergence in the Temporal time line since our MC is now mucking around like a gigantic butterfly of chaos. lol. 

 

That's what I want from these fanfics that insert MC into the normal timeline. 

Btw, since this character is called Shinkumaru I will call this reality Line S. 

 

Like I commented to the author. Give me some love! Give me interesting what ifs, and divergence...who lives and who dies....since our MC is now playing around this new time line. 

No spoilers...but to the hardcore fans...you know who(s) I'm talking about...

 

Biggest divergence: Hinata and Naruto getting together MUCH MUCH earlier than the original timeline. Seriously...600 + episodes before they get it on? ye gods! 

 

 

Chillingbear
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I have a read a ton of OC/Self Inserts for Naruto and this is pretty generic. 

Main difference is our MC goes through reincranation/karma spending screen at the start and has a stupid amount of points. Takes away a bit of the fun reading it when we know no matter what the MC does is going to be godlike

Overall I'm disappointed. This is a standard OP-fest with no new interesting powers or way of fighting. Our MC has the super special eyes at the start and wood-release which is what 80% of people choose for these sorts of fics. 

It is well written, but not unique in any manner and copies the cannon story line to guide the story making it too easily predicable. 

So overall I would say this is a very average naruto fic. I have read too many fics just like this one to catch my eye. 

Tranquilmoth
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I enjoyed it thoroughly, I hope you continue the story at some point is great.

Azkan
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This story is progressing nicely,  and I love every chapter of it. 

Thunderpuppy21
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I need this one to start again so bad easily my favorite ff

Blackfish
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I have read a lot and I mean A LOT of Naruto fanfics. In my opinion this is pretty good. I hope that you will complete this!!

iLikeToast
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The reason I like this fan-fic is due to how the character is implemented into the story. Im not talking about someone being reincarnated into the main charcters body, but a completely new character that blends in with the story and characters. Also, I myself like a character that is pretty OP but not enough to prohibit the storyline. It could be little early to say this though. However, i admire the work you have put into this and i hope you keep writng.

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The grammar is good from my perspective, although its been a couple of days since i've read this, it was'nt enough to have me guessing what you were saying.

The story is progressing smoothly and accurately according to the events that happen in Naruto. While not very original, it delivers an amusing and exciting read with what its desplayed.

I find that the side charcters need a bit more fleshing out and personality, but thats to be expected when there are under 20 chapters.

The MC has a goal and motivation, so thats a plus for me.

You could also improve on character dialogue.

Finally, just go read it. Just because it does'nt sound appealing does not mean you should'nt give the story a try.

PS; Continue with what you are doing author and i hope you can keep writing this.

 

Bezelel666
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Please don't drop it.....  8/10

Famine
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Love this naruto story great OC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!