A soul of a man floats through endless darkness, awaiting its next reincarnation. The man remember nothing and knows little, but when his chance to reincarnate comes he will learn he has an abnormal amount of positive karma. Positive karma he can use to gain plenty of advantages in his next life. In fear of being powerless or becoming a pawn he makes full use of it, becoming someone who would surely leave a mark on the world he heads to. His destination? A world of ninja, shinobi. The world of Naruto.


I do no own Naruto nor anything else from the source material. This is only a fanfiction.

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Chillingbear
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I have a read a ton of OC/Self Inserts for Naruto and this is pretty generic. 

Main difference is our MC goes through reincranation/karma spending screen at the start and has a stupid amount of points. Takes away a bit of the fun reading it when we know no matter what the MC does is going to be godlike

Overall I'm disappointed. This is a standard OP-fest with no new interesting powers or way of fighting. Our MC has the super special eyes at the start and wood-release which is what 80% of people choose for these sorts of fics. 

It is well written, but not unique in any manner and copies the cannon story line to guide the story making it too easily predicable. 

So overall I would say this is a very average naruto fic. I have read too many fics just like this one to catch my eye. 

TheBreakernew
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This fanFic is pretty good, it's not a cringe fest like a lot of these stories can be. The main character is nicely intergrated into "Naruto the show"'s pre-existing elements, and the story flows naturally. Plus, the grammar is good, which is always nice to see.

kao
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Time Line S instead of Time Line N

Narahuto. 

I see. It is a good fan fic. So far it's got very very minimal typo's. The plot so far seems to follow the original Naruto Time line, I will call that Line N, for Naruto. 

 

BUT....

 

Now...after chapter 14...I hope to start to see divergence in the Temporal time line since our MC is now mucking around like a gigantic butterfly of chaos. lol. 

 

That's what I want from these fanfics that insert MC into the normal timeline. 

Btw, since this character is called Shinkumaru I will call this reality Line S. 

 

Like I commented to the author. Give me some love! Give me interesting what ifs, and divergence...who lives and who dies....since our MC is now playing around this new time line. 

No spoilers...but to the hardcore fans...you know who(s) I'm talking about...

 

Biggest divergence: Hinata and Naruto getting together MUCH MUCH earlier than the original timeline. Seriously...600 + episodes before they get it on? ye gods! 

 

 

Bezelel666
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Please don't drop it.....  8/10

Tranquilmoth
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I enjoyed it thoroughly, I hope you continue the story at some point is great.

Blackfish
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I have read a lot and I mean A LOT of Naruto fanfics. In my opinion this is pretty good. I hope that you will complete this!!

Famine
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Love this naruto story great OC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Azkan
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This story is progressing nicely,  and I love every chapter of it. 

Thunderpuppy21
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I need this one to start again so bad easily my favorite ff

Shadow of doubt
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Great so far, I hope you like naruto.

Well written, and characters feel fairly fleshed out. The pacing of the story feels a little off at the moment but that may just be from how the prologue - chapter 2 was handled. 

Overall a story that most naruto fans would like unless your the type who doesn't like it when cannon changes, then I'd suggest that you watch an anime called naruto for that, I heard it sticks to the cannon really well.

Main character is powerful, yet doesn't feel super overpowered at the moment (chapter 17). I do love over powered main characters, it's always a great read for me.