Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy LitRPG Magic
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In the aftermath of a terrorist attack, an unlucky tourist finds that the world has changed around him. With an incomplete System to guide him, he must make his way through The Labyrinth and survive to find the core in order to make it back home. Maybe with some luck, Jake will live long enough to figure out who the players are in this new world. But they don't want to be found out just yet, nor do they want him to get back to Earth alive. And none of them understand what The Labyrinth really is, or what it wants.

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I havent even read, just looks interesting. I prob will come back when there are more chapters, b/c i hate falling in love with books with low chapter counts.