Infinite Wishes

by Misery

Daniel Nelvine Rosecrown, cough cough, i mean Kimy Shinguru, is just your ordinary super hardcore gamer, leaving his home to the outside world in order to replenish his food supply for another streak of nonstop gaming, suddenly dies a harsh death by arrows, just to meet god, whom said he killed him on purpose, and refused to give him life again on earth. God needed to transfer him to another world for an unknown reason, and as compensation, would not only make him younger and more OP, but grant him one wish, any wish. I truly do wonder what Kimy wished for...

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EverShadow
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It's a fun story to read. Not too serious yet, just an OP character story. While it is a bit simple in character development so far, and there are a few cases where "your" was used when it should've been "you're", I still enjoyed what I've read so far. Don't go into the story expecting a deep and thought provoking plotline, just go in there to have some easy reading. Keep it up, and thanks for writing!

SeafoodFirst
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 You should try to put what you shown on the summery all in a single prolouge or upload 2 chapters at once. 

AdvancedGP
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it does seem to have a general overused idea but i really love the spin on this and how the characters act!

almightyinfinitus
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