The rewrite into first person is up to the fifth chapter here on Royal Road and up to chapter seven on my patreon.
Obviously those chapters are no longer getting posted here, so make sure you get to the new story. A link for that is in the pre and post author notes. You can obviously find it in my list of fictions as well.
Obviously I love comments, and I suggest that you follow the new fiction so you can get the new chapters.
Also, please rate the new story if you like it.