An Unlikely Haven

An Unlikely Haven

by Krigg

 A story about a small bar inside an alley of the Imperial Capital and how it's more than what it seems to be...

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  • Pages :
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Baenan
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So far this story has been very dialog heavy. That said, the story that is being woven has been a pleasure to read.

 

I'm glad to find a story that doesn't depend so much on violence for conflict. The main character's internal conflict helps the story to feel very real and relatable.