Dead in the Water: A Dungeon's Tale

Dead in the Water: A Dungeon's Tale

by Guardsman Sparky

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Waking up unexpectedly, trapped on a desert island is never pleasant.  It's even less so when you wake up as a newborn dungeon core.  Only time will tell if this fledgling dungeon will thrive, or if he's dead in the water.

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argusthecat
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Review written as of chapter three.

This one is amusing me so far.  I like the prospective plotlines of a pirate ship dungeon.  I love the concept of a perpetually put-upon dungeon core character.  And I really dig that this story does the thing where the summons are individuals, not cannon fodder.  I look forward to seeing where this one goes in the future, and I really think that my estimation of it could go way up over the next ten chapters or so.

ThisIsBai
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You need to read this!

A fast-paced dungeon building romp with actual monster personality. For fans of humor, good story telling, and dungeons!

10/10 would recommend and read again!

BinLox
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I want more! The minions are characters/individuals, not mobs/npcs. I like it.

BoredBeyondBelief
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Bubbles is a entity that applies +100 charm to anyone seeing it doing the cute crab dance.

Proceed with caution.

Dalton
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The story has skeleton pirates, what more could I ask for (them to develop the ability to speak thats what)

Magstzerp
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Awesome is the only word I can think to use as a description for this.

Too bad the author has not posted a chapter after "home on the range" for twenty days now.

Hope he hadn't dropped the story.

2.5 stars due to the story being potentially abandoned. 

Will upgrade to 5 stars if and when a new chapter is posted.