Otherworld Women Are Scary

Otherworld Women Are Scary

by LongLost

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    Defeating the Demon King was, unluckily or luckily for Deryn, only a new beginning in a new world. Unfortunately for him, his worrisome first impression of this new world of Riel seems to be the norm.

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 It caught my interest as i was going through and enjoyed the idea very much. Premise is not bad, a different take on the 'otherworld, 'transmigration' thing i is an interesting read for the fast pacers. The story is quite bare and leaves much to the readers imagination on what the setting is supposed to look like. I won't rate i high because it is not complete or past its initial stage at the very least, but author; you have a good thing going keep it up!