Becoming God

Becoming God

by SlowDeath

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Alex Quaker, a normal high school student that normally bored, is given a system that seems to belong to gods called God's Function and a chance to be a god.

Small part of chapter One:

Warning: Small Spoiler

During the game I hear a voice in my head that removes my attention from the game.

[Loading.....]

"What..."

[1%]

[34%]

"Uh.."

[79%]

[100%]

[Congratulations you have been randomly chosen to fill one of the Fifty spots to become a Trainee level Mortal and receive God's Function with the chance to become God]

[For more information think “Help” and you will be show a list of commands and functions]

[Warning: leeking knowledge of God's Function will Result with you and the people you told to be erased]

“This seems fun.” I whisper to myself.

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