A Knight born from Magic and War

A Knight born from Magic and War

by SorrowTheSlayer

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Traumatising content

Lidel Veylume is the son of a Knight! This is also his goal; the noble and proud way of Knighthood!

But war erupts in his country, and he is sent to the front lines! He earns merits but his morality crumbles. After a tragic encounter his aptitude for magic is revealed. He is sent to the Magic Academy of their kingdom, to harness and learn to wield magic.

Watch as he does his best to keep a straight mind, and a good heart. Will he crumble? Or will he become one of the noblest proffesions; a Knight!

 

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Hi Guys, it's me author guy. Anyway, this is the first time i'm writing a Novel, so im hoping you'd read it, even only the first chapter to give me some advice and feedback. So, I'm currently reading a load of Wuxia/Chinese Novels so my own novel may be influenced by some of this, but i hope you still give it a try! Thanks, so much!

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