Naruto Otsutsuki "The Immoral Legend"

by robinyohouse

Fan Fiction HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy Harem Male Lead Martial Arts Strong Lead
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 After Naruto‚Äôs 5th birthday, the God of Everything (Subete no Kami) had enough of the civilians and shinobi alike treating Naruto like a monster, so he adopted Naruto as his son and his successor. He trains Naruto how to fight with Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Zenjutsu, Senjutsu, and his personal style of the sword. He then made Naruto return to Konoha just before the graduation of the academy and become a legend in his own right.

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Please continu you're story is it a center of my attention

Death God
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Goo story can't wait for next chapter

lodoly
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It's off to a good start. Naruto is a little bit TOO OP, but I can overlook that.

And I would have given this a better review if only there were more chapters.

But keep up the good work mate.