Fallen Devil

Fallen Devil

by Gagzkgnw

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

Quanye Lest awoke from his quanye rest to go on a quanye quest to be the quanye best.

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Rascozilla
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I've read up to chapter 25 and I think for my sake I’m going to stop there. Especially after reading chapter 25, it felt like something you'd read on April 1st. 

The story feels like a translation of a Chinese novel or maybe the writer is practicing their grammar. 

Pros:   Few spelling mistakes.   

Cons:  Loose world building.  Xianxia clone.   Sexual assault (Ch.25).  Lackluster MC.

Alekseyev
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Seriously, i am sure you could make some better descriptión about the story