The Scourged Earth

by Mirrored

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Horror Sci-fi Cyberpunk Grimdark LitRPG Magic Male Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content

 Derrick is no ones hero.  He is barely dealing with his mundane life when all of humanity is forced to confront the extraordinary. Overnight, all across the world, mysterious machines appear. They offer people the chance to purchase almost anything they can think of. Weapons, medicine and even super human abilities are offered, seemingly for free.

But following these machines, come the Scourges. The most dangerous creatures, diseases and machines that infest the universe. Ever growing and battling, these empires of horror and hunger will overhelm and devour the Earth and its inhabitants. Unless Derrick and humanity can stand against all the horrors that battle between the stars.

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My first Story, an attempt to turn the standard fantasy litrpg apocalypse into a Sci Fi. Trying for a slower build to power for the MC, so don't expect him to have cheat powers. I delight in helpful crticism so no holding back plz.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1.1 The World Changes ago
1.2 Hitting the Gym ago
1.3 Whet the Blades ago
Interlude: Gods and Monsters ago
1.4 Me and you in the Melee ago
1.5 Explosive Situation ago
1.6 Rest and Recuperation ago
1.7 Hunting Grounds ago
1.8 The Next Level ago
2.1 A New Day ago
2.2 A New Battlefield ago
2.3 Cakewalk ago
Interlude: Gods and Monsters II ago
2.4 Human Nature ago
2.5 Social Creatures ago
2.6 Moves ago
Interlude: Ghost Town ago
Just a Poll and some music suggestions. ago
2.7 Questions and Answers ago
2.8 Dark Gifts ago
2.9 Scavengers ago
2.10 Pull of Greed ago
2.11 Tyranny ago
3.1 Standing Out ago
3.2 Temptation and Meditation ago
3.3 Plots and Armor ago
Interlude: Hierarchies ago
3.4 Trust and Trials ago
3.5 Support ago
3.6 Confidence under Fire ago
3.7 Progress ago
3.8 Alien Rules I ago
Interlude: Subtle Beasts ago
3.9 Caught in the Fold ago
3.10 Alien Rules II ago
3.11 Talent ago
3.12 Commitment ago
4.1 The Basics I ago
4.2 The Basics II ago
4.3 Personal Growth ago
4.4 Personal Growth II ago
4.5 Personal Growth III ago
4.6 Oil and Water ago
4.7 Undercurrents ago
4.8 Faces and Voices ago
4.9 Seizing Power ago
4.10 Meeting New People ago
4.11 Meeting New People II ago
4.12 Making an Impression ago
4.13 Unneighbourly ago
4.14 Tools and Traps ago
4.15 Nemesis ago
Interlude: Priorities ago
4.16 Nemesis II ago
4.17 What Lurks Beneath ago
5.1 Wake Up Call ago
5.2 No Good Deed ago
5.3 Goes Unpunished ago
5.4 Bargains ago
5.5 Responsibility ago
5.6 Rushing Ahead ago
5.7 Heart of the Matter ago
5.8 Under your Skin ago
5.9 Under Your Skin II ago
5.10 Fog of War ago
5.11 Fog of War II ago
5.12 Party Tricks I ago
5.13 Party Tricks II ago
5.14 Deleterious ago
5.15 Celebration ago
Interlude: Complications ago
Editing, Scheduling and Patreon Announcement ago
6.1 Without a Hitch ago
6.2 Limits ago
6.3 Litigation ago
6.4 Helpless ago
6.5 Innovation ago
6.6 Abomination ago
6.7 Complications ago
6.8 Breakneck ago
6.9 Moving Targets ago
6.10 Moving Targets II ago
 6.11 Recoil ago
6.12 Wild Theories ago
Interlude: Unnatural ago
6.13 Reaching ago
6.14 Drama and Queens ago

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Vin
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I have read till the latest chapter and I am definitely hooked. The story has good content and the the chatachar definition is good. 

Some interludes feel random but all in all it's worth reading. The MC is not some superpowered guy but someone who slowly improves and the characters are introduced in a smoother way without feeling it being forced into the plot. 

Definitely looking forward to more .

TheLoneOne
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I really liked this story, give it a read!

I thoroughly enjoyed this book, it's 10/10 the character power/flow seems steady and reliable, i really like how the author changes the way the character is named, it kind of makes me zoom out on perspective and i found it a lot of fun

 

I found spelling mistakes here and there but i was enjoying myself and they weren't bad/visibly noticeable 

Aren Horsman
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Mild Spoilers:

Possibly the most underrated story I've come across on Royal Road. The System integration is done better than any story I've read thus far, and I love the fact that due to its nature (it's not some perfect, omniscient entity, but a program with entities helping to guide it) and therefore it makes mistakes and has exploitable holes that the enemies can make use of.

If you enjoy integration, lit-rpg style novels....read this. Its character development, world-building, and plot progression is some of the best I've read in YEARS. Seriously, this author needs more attention.

Psychomeltdown
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I'm at 4.16 and it's an excellent story so far.  There are some rough patches, but nothing that'll cause one to drop the story. 

It's the usual apocalyptic tropes. An anti-social loner becomes a badass when the world ends, aliens invade, and humanity is brought to the brink of extinction.  He survives through sheer grit, determination, and a lot of luck. 

But it's done with enough imagination and skill that it is not boring or a copy of other such stories.  The characters are somewhat realistic, with realistic goals and needs. People realize they are in a war for survival.

The aliens are interesting, the method in which they manage to get to earth is very well done.  Humanity wouldn’t be able to stand up against a fleet of OP space aliens in starships.  The differing groups fighting for Earth is also an interesting aspect.

Power and growth of the characters are well paced.  It isn’t training montages or a ‘glitch’ in the system that allows the characters to get stronger, but simple grit, determination, and luck; also using resources creatively. 

Excellent story, overall. 

 

 

Wirde
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Just read trough the series to chapter 3.44 from scratch in 2 days and the verdict is: This series is simply fantastic!
The setting is unique, intressting powers, the characters aren't one dimensional and it's not too predictable either.

Good work Mirrored, continue like this!

Stephen Lewis
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Ch 3.43 

Pretty good read I enjoyed this story 

I only remember a few spelling mistakes 

All in all pretty good read 

Atreivahavi
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Enemies seems to be very powerful but they are actually very stupid. Mc is a dense dumbass. Anything else is not very bad.

I know you're coming here for relieving stress so I am not going to make very serious review. So storywise everything is good. You can feel the oppression in the first chapters but later story goes downhill from my perspective. Characters feels very forced to me. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

 

xiaoxiaolav
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 if you enjoy the new genre of earth becoming game like and monsters appearing (reverse isekai?) then you should definitely give this one a try as its one of if not the best of them

Serpentine13
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So I was really reluctant to start reading this story for some reason, so glad I did though. The protagonist isn't one of those typical two dimensional characters I often find in stories. Actually all the characters feel pretty real and human. The author nailed the horror and sci-fi elements for me and the litrpg is the icing on the cake. Even managed to slip in a little romance that didn't make me immediately sneer in disdain.

Anyway, definitely worth trying out at least, especially those of you who are on the fence!

Sly Rhyder
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Best story on Royal Road

By far the best story I have read to date on Royal Road.  One of the best stories I have read in a long time.  Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter :)