Trouble in the Stars

Trouble in the Stars

by TinkCalris

Candice bites her lower lip as her target is within view, an ancient battleship sunk near the end of the old expansion wars.  Its a ghost ship.  She knows that other scavangers have come across the wreck before, and its probably picked clean; but she just had to try her own hand at it, experience the relic known as Castle for herself.  

she had no intention of actually finding anything on this trek; but sometimes fate has more in store than we can ever anticipate.

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I know, I have several stories I haven't finished, why am I starting a new one.... well inspiration.  

 

Image used with permission, to see their other creations: https://vombavr.deviantart.com/art/Sophia-447784085

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