Dimensional Colleseum

Dimensional Colleseum

by protocenturian

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  • Profanity

 

     Come one come all, and welcome to the world's greatest entertainment since the fall of Rome. Life, death, victims, voyeurs, the best of society, the lowest of plebeians and to keep it all extremely interesting, todays patrons could very easily be tomorrow’s entertainment.  All compliments of the ultimate goddess fate. Now all that’s missing is the stage.

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This book is awesome, and while it can be improved, what can’t. After on ply a few chapters (3) I’ve been hooked. I’ll honestly be disappointed if the author stops, as this definitely has the potential to be one of the great works, like randomly ghosthound. I definitely recommend reading this, you’ll fall I love with it straight away, and if you can’t, message me, as I’d like to know what being heartless is like.

thus review is as of chapter 3