Living a regular life as a college dropout, a self employed internet addict with a lack of a girlfriend since his whole carreer change, Jupiter finds himself alone and uninterested in anything really.
It all changes when he impulsivily buys an item from a not so smart pirate which turns into an unexpected meeting with slime god.
Follow along to find out just how, what and where our buddy Jupiter potentially loses his sanity on this adventure of dimensional proportions!
Genre: Fantasy/Sci-Fi/ Game Elements
Just leaving this note here to say this is my first fiction and I am happy to see where this goes and hopefully the people who read enjoy my megalomania put on paper and lived through my little buddy Jupiter~
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2.5 is average, so good at 4 stars with some room for improvement (which is literally every author out there). The author is rapidly improving (*shakes fist at cliffhangers) and the story reads much smoother.
Good story so far up to chapter 10, though I hope there are more characters. Looking forward to more chapters!
Nitpicks: none really left, hopefully this doesnt devolve into the typical overpoered Litrpg that is prevalent on here. So far I like it and find myslef looking for the chapters among the 3 pages of stories I have favorited.
Good grammar and few if any typos.
Great start! Good job, keep it up!
The story is good and the characters are acting in a reasonable way. There are a few grammar errors but it is not a problem 'cause it is still readable. I like the past paced update of the story. Just work hard. Sorry for this late review, I'm very busy these past few weeks
so far read up to chapter 6 (current chapter) and i feel hopeful for a long and continious series of chapters:) . very good start