The dream of dreamers!
On my way home from school, I was suddenly dragged into a different world!
What shall I do?!
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With good development, slow but good flow, and nice character development.
Sometimes new things appear like the 2 titles or the lady in his world before the warp, and his future plans. But they stay forgotten with the story development
Will be following! and sorry for my english...
I feel that the MC is just way too peaceful and weak even though he already had the "rigid training" from his father. The story itself is really good for an easygoing story but I think that you need to involve some action that shows some of the MC power
i really liked the beginning of the story but as it progressed it was losing me more and more i don't know if its b/c the spacing between release made me forget things or what but either way i stopped reading around chapter 19, i'm gonna wait til there's about 25 or 30 chapters then re-pick it up and give it another go
I liked the story and style mostly but there was just too much plot twists in row. Suddenly whole story flipped upside down. So many things happen without proper explanation that it killed this story for me : /
Tough everything else was pretty good. Writing style, grammar and spacing.
Your good writer but made plot twits that may not sit well with most readers.