Mother of Monsters

Mother of Monsters

by Dark Rose_Ruby

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Rage, humiliation, disgrace, and a darkness that pulls at her insides. Abandoned by the other Gods and forced into eternal imprisonment. Evdokia, Mother of Monsters, Mistress of the Dark, and Lady of Shadows who has been trapped for thousands of years, finally escapes. To avoid drawing the other Gods' attention, she descends to Hellas disguised as a mortal girl. There she finds that the world has changed. The heroes that once fought to protect and save, now slay her children in an attempt to gain recognition and fame. The Gods hold on the hearts of the people has weakened and now Evdokia has a chance, a chance at revenge, or a chance at happiness, it´s up to her. 

 

Authors Note: This is my first attempt at writing. Please read and tell me how you like it. I would love feedback, good or bad. I love the Forgotten Conqueror series and I'm begging Za1d3 to continue writing. If he chose to do so, it would make me and many other people very happy. :)

UPDATE: Wow! I can't believe it's been 3 years since I wrote this. I have grown a lot as a writer, and I think this story has potential, so I will edit and continue it. Thank you for all your love and support <3

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Hyeon
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Interesting idea (:

Good beginning, well written with an interesting main character and world. Im happy and wait too see what the future brings for her °^°

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I like it! Please continue to make more chapters. ;) ...........

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