reincarnation of a phoenix

reincarnation of a phoenix

by EJ Blackson

Edwy Sharp a 94 year old man who has lived his life to the most. He went from being a world class swordsman to using that knowledge to manufacture swords to make a multi-billion dollar company. Of course this was all before stumbling upon cultivation and Qi where he finds his partner has been planning on creating Qi via a generator to fill this unverses lack of it and allow people to cultivate but, before it could happen an accident occurs where the generator blows up with Edwy being the only person near. The next thing he knows he his born into a brand-new world...

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Firstly your concept of qi generator is a flaw itself.

You should have said is a qi condenser instead

And the world settings, plus....

You know you should first go and read a few good cultivation novel first before you attempt tobwrite one...