Spirit Immortal

by Linodo

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Fantasy Tragedy Male Lead Martial Arts Wuxia
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Over a million years ago, the first human contracted with the first Spirit. Ever since then, Spirit use has become commonplace. Humans used Spirits to carry items and start fires. Eventually, even start wars. Thousands upon thousands of years past and one day, one human did the impossible. He transcended his mortality and ascended to the realm above.  

In the present day, the Frie Clan was once a great clan of the Himmel empire. However, a devastating battle ten years ago crippled the clan and their numbers dwindled. To make up for their loss, the upper echelons decided to adopt young orphans and nurture them to become a future pillar of the weakened clan. Shin was one of those orphans. 

Although picked up by the Frie Clan, not all is smooth sailing for Shin and the other orphans...


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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 1: Fight me! ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 2: The Day of Spirits (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 3: The Day of Spirits (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 4: The Day of Spirits (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 5: The Day of Spirits (4) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 6: Second Elder's Grandson (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 7: Second Elder's Grandson (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 8: Second Elder's Grandson (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 9: Spirit Awakening Ceremony (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 10: Spirit Awakening Ceremony (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 11: Spirit Awakening Ceremony (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 12: Spirit Awakening Ceremony (4) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 13: Do you like Hammers? (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 14: Do you like Hammers? (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 15: Do you like Hammers? (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 16: The Cute Little Cerulean Koi (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 17: The Cute Little Cerulean Koi (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 18: The Cute Little Cerulean Koi (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 19: The Cute Little Cerulean Koi (4) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 20: The First Elder's Dilemma (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 21: The First Elder's Dilemma (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 22: The First Elder's Dilemma (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 23: The First Elder's Dilemma (4) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 24: Reach for the top! (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan ||Chapter 25: Reach for the top! (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 26: Reach for the top! (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 27: The Clan Athenaeum (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 28: The Clan Athenaeum (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 29: The Clan Athenaeum (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 30: The Clan Athenaeum (4) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 31: Eminence of the Lake (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 32: Eminence of the Lake (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 33: Eminence of the Lake (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 34: The Harvest Festival (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 35: The Harvest Festival (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 36: The Harvest Festival (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 37: Receiving the Mission (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 38: Receiving the Mission (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 39: Not as simple as it seems... (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 40: Not as simple as it seems... (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 41: Not as simple as it seems... (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 42: Not as simple as it seems... (4) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 43: The Curtain Falls (1) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 44: The Curtain Falls (2) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 45: The Curtain Falls (3) ago
Book 1: The Frie Clan || Chapter 46: The Curtain Falls (4) ago
End of Book 1 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 1: Leaving the Clan (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 2: Leaving the Clan (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 3: Leaving the Clan (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 4: Goodbyes (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 5: Goodbyes (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 6: Goodbyes (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 7: Departure (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 8: Departure (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 9: On the road (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 10: On the road (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 11: When you flaunt your riches, bandits are sure to flock (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 12: When you flaunt your riches, bandits are sure to flock (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 13: When you flaunt your riches, bandits are sure to flock (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 14: The Black Sword (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 15: The Black Sword (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 16: The Black Sword (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 17: The New Home (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 18: The New Home (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 19: The New Home (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 20: Yakkyoku Clinic (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 21: Yakkyoku Clinic (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 22: Yakkyoku Clinic (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 23: Yakkyoku Clinic (4) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 24: Lady Seraphim (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 25: Lady Seraphim (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 26: Lady Seraphim (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 27: The Mayor's Office (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 28: The Mayor's Office (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 29: The Mayor's Office (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 30: Mayor Nadeo (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 31: Mayor Nadeo (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 32: Mayor Nadeo (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 33: The Daily Life of an Attendant at Yakkyoku Clinic (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 34: The Daily Life of an Attendant at Yakkoyoku Clinic (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 35: The Daily Life of an Attendant at Yakkoyoku Clinic (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 36: The Daily Life of an Attendant at Yakkyoku Clinic (4) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 37: Chasing a Murderer (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 38: Chasing a Murderer (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 39: The She-Devil Pays a Visit (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 40: The She-Devil Pays a Visit (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 41: The She-Devil Pays a Visit (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 42: The First Patient (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 43: The First Patient (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 44: The First Patient (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 45: The First Patient (4) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 46: The First Patient (5) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 47: The First Patient (6) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 48: Gawil Jefferson (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 49: Gawil Jefferson (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 50: Gawil Jefferson (3) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 51: Dreams under the Starry Night Sky (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 52: Dreams under the Starry Night Sky (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 53: Yggdrasil, the Eternal Burning Tree (1) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 54: Yggdrasil, the Eternal Burning Tree (2) ago
Book 2: Chilyoja Waypoint || Chapter 55: The Hippocratic Oath ago
End of Book 2 & Author's thoughts ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 1: Three Years Later... (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 2: Three Years Later... (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 3: Three Years Later... (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 4: A Sudden Change in the Spiritual Body (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 5: A Sudden Change in the Spiritual Body (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 6: A Sudden Change in the Spiritual Body (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 7: Learning the New Spiritual Ability (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 8: Learning the New Spiritual Ability (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 9: Learning the New Spiritual Ability (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 10: A Pleasant Surprise (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 11: A Pleasant Surprise (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 12: A Pleasant Surprise (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 13: I'm Going With You! (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 14: I'm Going With You! (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 15: The Elite Squad Assembles (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 16: The Elite Squad Assembles (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 17: The Elite Squad Assembles (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 18: What Do You Know About Beasts? (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 19: What Do You Know About Beasts? (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 20: Arriving at Aldrich's Keep (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 21: Arriving at Aldrich's Keep (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 22: Arriving at Aldrich's Keep (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 23: The Youngest Healer in History (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 24: The Youngest Healer in History (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 25: The Youngest Healer in History (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 26: Awter Lake (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 27: Awter Lake (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 28: The Uncharted Wilderness (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 29: The Uncharted Wilderness (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 30: The Uncharted Wilderness (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 31: Something's Not Right! (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 32: Something's Not Right (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 33: Something's Not Right! (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 34: Attack! Attack! Attack! (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 35: Attack! Attack! Attack! (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 36: Attack! Attack! Attack! (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 37: Teardrops In The Rain (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 38: Teardrops In The Rain (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 39: Teardrops In The Rain (3) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 40: Teardrops In The Rain (4) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 41: The Final Stage (1) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 42: The Final Stage (2) ago
Book 3: Aldrich's Keep || Chapter 43: The Final Stage (3) ago
End of Book 3 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 1: The Grand Burial (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 2: The Grand Burial (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 3: The Grand Burial (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 4: The Return (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 5: The Return (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 6: The Return (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 7: Meeting Of The Heavyweights (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 8: Meeting Of The Heavyweights (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 9: Meeting Of The Heavyweights (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 10: Meeting Of The Heavyweights (4) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 11: A Chilling Wind Draws Closer (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 12: A Chilling Wind Draws Closer (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 13: I'm Sorry... (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 14: I'm Sorry... (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 15: I'm Sorry... (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 16: Visiting The Waypoint Once More (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 17: Visiting The Waypoint Once More (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 18: A Year And A Half Later... (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 19: A Year And A Half Later... (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 20: A Year And A Half Later... (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 21: The Changes In Their Lives (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 22: The Changes In Their Lives (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 23: A Scene Of Carnage (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 24: A Scene Of Carnage (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 25: A Scene Of Carnage (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 26: A Scene Of Carnage (4) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 27: Perfect Imperfections (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 28: Perfect Imperfections (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 29: Perfect Imperfections (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 30: The Reunion And The Separation (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 31: The Reunion And The Separation (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 32: The Reunion And The Separation (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 33: Solitary Thoughts (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 34: Solitary Thoughts (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 35: The Truth (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 36: The Truth (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 37: The Truth (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 38: Battle Of Frie Mountain (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 39: Battle Of Frie Mountain (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 40: Battle Of Frie Mountain (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 41: Battle Of Frie Mountain (4) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 42: The Burning Rose (1) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 43: The Burning Rose (2) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 44: The Burning Rose (3) ago
Book 4: Fairy Tales || Chapter 45: The Unfulfilled Promise ago
End of Book 4 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 1: The Broken Oath ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 2: Plans For The Future (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 3: Plans For The Future (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 4: The Golden String Of Fate ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 5: Goodbye, Lily... (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 6: Goodbye, Lily... (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 7: Goodbye, Lily... (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 8: New Beginnings (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 9: New Beginnings (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 10: Principal Erudito (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 11: Principal Erudito (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 12: Principal Erudito (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 13: The New Home (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 14: The New Home (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 15: Strange Encounters (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 16: Strange Encounters (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 17: Strange Encounters (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 18: Strange Encounters (4) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 19: Facing The Bronzed-Face Bastard Once More (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 20: Facing The Bronzed-Face Bastard Once More (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 21: Orientation Week (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 22: Orientation Week (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 23: Orientation Week (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 24: Orientation Week (4) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 25: The School Year Begins (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 26: The School Year Begins (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 27: The School Year Begins (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 28: The School Year Begins (4) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 29: The First Combat Session (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 30: The First Combat Session (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 31: The First Combat Session (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 32: Learning A Different Path (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 33: Learning A Different Path (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 34: Shizen Dundlewoods ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 35: A Tempting Offer (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 36: A Tempting Offer (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 37: Showing Off (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 38: Showing Off (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 39: Showing Off (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 40: More Special Treatment?! (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 41: More Special Treatment?! (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 42: More Special Treatment?! (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 43: An Unavoidable Fate (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 44: An Unavoidable Fate (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 45: An Unavoidable Fate (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 46: Elrin Zedcris (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 47: Elrin Zedcris (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 48: Elrin Zedcris (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 49: The Spirit Core Realm (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 50: The Spirit Core Realm (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 51: The Spirit Core Realm (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 52: Adapting To Changes (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 53: Adapting To Changes (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 54: Mid-Year Practicals (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 55: Mid-Year Practicals (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 56: Rewards For Excellence (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 57: Rewards For Excellence (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 58: The Challenge Ahead ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 59: The Tournament Begins (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 60: The Tournament Begins (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 61: The Tournament Begins (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 62: The Tournament Begins (4) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 63: The Tournament Begins (5) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 64: The Tournament Begins (6) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 65: The Tournament Begins (7) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 66: Starlight As Bright As Day (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 67: Starlight As Bright As Day (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 68: Starlight As Bright As Day (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 69: Starlight As Bright As Day (4) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 70: The Final Eight (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 71: The Final Eight (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 72: Danroy Frithron (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 73: Danroy Frithron (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 74: Danroy Frithron (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 75: Suji Lasgeor (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 76: Suji Lasgeor (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 77: Suji Lasgeor (3) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 78: Suji Lasgeor (4) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 79: Kanari Saniela (1) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 80: Kanari Saniela (2) ago
Book 5: The Capital || Chapter 81: Kanari Saniela (3) ago
End of Book 5 & Authors Thoughts ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 1: A Fresh Start (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 2: A Fresh Start (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 3: A Fresh Start (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 4: A Fresh Start (4) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 5: Urgent News (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 6: Urgent News (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 7: The Land Of Dreams (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 8: The Land Of Dreams (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 9: The Land Of Dreams (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 10: Dexsot Teinost!!! (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 11: Dexsot Teinost!!! (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 12: Hunting For Clues (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 13: Hunting For Clues (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 14: Hunting For Clues (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 15: Hunting For Clues (4) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 16: Mort Bay (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 17: Mort Bay (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 18: Mort Bay (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 19: The Most Devoted Lovebird In The World? (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 20: The Most Devoted Lovebird In The World? (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 21: Harbinger Of Chaos (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 22: Harbinger Of Chaos (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 23: Harbinger Of Chaos (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 24: Harbinger Of Chaos (4) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 25: What Have They Done? (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 26: What Have They Done? (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 27: Welcome! ... To Hell! (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 28: Welcome! ... To Hell! (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 29: Confrontation (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 30: Confrontation (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 31: Confrontation (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 32: Retaliation (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 33: Retaliation (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 34: Retaliation (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 35: Underestimation (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 36: Underestimation (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 37: Underestimation (3) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 38: Salvation (1) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 39: Salvation (2) ago
Book 6: Foundations For The Future || Chapter 40: Towards A New Tomorrow ago
End of Book 6 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 1: Invitation (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 2: Invitation (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 3: Those Who Are Attending (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 4: Those Who Are Attending (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 5: Those Who Are Attending (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 6: A New Land Of Dreams (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 7: A New Land Of Dreams (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 8: A New Land Of Dreams (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 9: Deus Citadel (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 10: Deus Citadel (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 11: Deus Citadel (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 12: The Summit Begins (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 13: The Summit Begins (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 14: The Summit Begins (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 15: Time Slows Down (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 16: Time Slows Down (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 17: Time Slows Down (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 18: A Saintly Affair (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 19: A Saintly Affair (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 20: An Overnight Star (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 21: An Overnight Star (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 22: The World Watches (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 23: The World Watches (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 24: The World Watches (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 25: The World Watches (4) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 26: Maidens Take The Stage (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 27: Maidens Take The Stage (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 28: Maidens Take The Stage (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 29: Maidens Take The Stage (4) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 30: Lukman (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 31: Lukman (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 32: Lukman (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 33: Comprehension (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 34: Comprehension (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 35: Comprehension (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 36: The Way Forward (1) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 37: The Way Forward (2) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 38: The Way Forward (3) ago
Book 7: The Summit || Chapter 39: The Way Forward (4) ago
End of Book 7 & Author's Thoughts ago
SS: A Valentine’s Story ago
SS: The Adventures of Kanari and Shizen ago
SS: The Fall Of The Imperial Physician ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 1: Four Years (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 2: Four Years (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 3: Four Years (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 4: Four Years (4) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 5: The Mission (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 6: The Mission (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 7: Finding A Guide (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 8: Finding A Guide (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 9: Finding A Guide (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 10: Finding A Guide (4) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 11: Two Weeks (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 12: Two Weeks (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 13: Girl's Talk (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 14: Girl's Talk (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 15: Girl's Talk (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 16: The Estrella Region (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 17: The Estrella Region (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 18: The Estrella Region (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 19: The Darkness And The Light (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 20: The Darkness And The Light (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 21: The Darkness And The Light (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 22: The Darkness And The Light (4) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 23: See You Again (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 24: See You Again (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 25: See You Again (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 26: A New Dawn, A New Day (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 27: A New Dawn, A New Day (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 28: A New Dawn, A New Day (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 29: The Dawn Breaks... ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 30: ... And The Darkness Arrives ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 31: Payirci (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 32: Payirci (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 33: Payirci (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 34: Payirci (4) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 35: Kanari And Shin (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 36: Kanari And Shin (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 37: Kanari And Shin (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 38: Kanari And Shin (4) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 39: I Am Ascending (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 40: I Am Ascending (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 41: I Am Ascending (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 42: I Am Ascending (4) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 43: I Am Ascending (5) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 44: Junius (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 45: Junius (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 46: Junius (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 47: The Paradise Heart (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 48: The Paradise Heart (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 49: The Paradise Heart (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 50: The Light That Consumes The Darkness (1) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 51: The Light That Consumes The Darkness (2) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 52: The Light That Consumes The Darkness (3) ago
Book 8: The Mercenary's Promise || Chapter 53: A New Promise ago
End of Book 8 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 1: The Oath That Couldn't Be Fulfilled ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 2: Forgiveness (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 3: Forgiveness (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 4: Forgiveness (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 5: Forgiveness (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 6: Shin Iofiel (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 7: Shin Iofiel (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 8: Shin Iofiel (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 9: Tying Up Loose Ends (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 10: Tying Up Loose Ends (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 11: Tying Up Loose Ends (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 12: Tying Up Loose Ends (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 13: Tying Up Loose Ends (5) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 14: The Reaffirmed Will (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 15: The Reaffirmed Will (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 16: The Reaffirmed Will (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 17: The Reaffirmed Will (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 18: Goodbye, Himmel Empire... ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 19: ... And Hello, Lantis Republic ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 20: The Longyu Clan (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 21: The Longyu Clan (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 22: The Longyu Clan (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 23: The Longyu Clan (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 24: Let's Have Some Fun (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 25: Let's Have Some Fun (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 26: Let's Have Some Fun (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 27: Let's Have Some Fun (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 28: Return Of The Jester (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 29: Return Of The Jester (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 30: The True Bosses Of The Lantis Republic (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 31: The True Bosses Of The Lantis Republic (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 32: The True Bosses Of The Lantis Republic (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 33: The True Bosses Of The Lantis Republic (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 34: Luminaries! Luminaries All Around! (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 35: Luminaries! Luminaries All Around! (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 36: Luminaries! Luminaries All Around! (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 37: The Longyu Clan's Top Dog (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 38: The Longyu Clan's Top Dog (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 39: The Prince And The Clown (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 40: The Prince And The Clown (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 41: The Prince And The Clown (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 42: The Champion Of Yingxiong Amphitheatre (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 43: The Champion Of Yingxiong Amphitheatre (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 44: The Champion Of Yingxiong Amphitheatre (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 45: The Champion Of Yingxiong Amphitheatre (4) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 46: The Trial of the Celestial River (1) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 47: The Trial of the Celestial River (2) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 48: The Trial of the Celestial River (3) ago
Book 9: The Celestial River || Chapter 49: ??? ????????? ?????? ????? ????? ago
End of Book 9 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 1: The Next Stage (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 2: The Next Stage (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 3: The Next Stage (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 4: The Next Stage (4) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 5: The Allfather's Next Move (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 6: The Allfather's Next Move (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 7: The Most Powerful Being In The World (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 8: The Most Powerful Being In The World (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 9: The Most Powerful Being In The World (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 10: The Most Powerful Being In The World (4) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 11: The Scion Of The Lantis Republic (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 12: The Scion Of The Lantis Republic (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 13: The Scion Of The Lantis Republic (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 14: The Fruits Of Labour (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 15: The Fruits Of Labour (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 16: The Fruits Of Labour (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 17: Restoration (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 18: Restoration (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 19: Restoration (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 20: Hunting Payircis (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 21: Hunting Payircis (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 22: Hunting Payircis (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 23: Hunting Payircis (4) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 24: The East Freezes (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 25: The East Freezes (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 26: The East Freezes (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 27: The East Freezes (4) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 28: Leading The Assault (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 29: Leading The Assault (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 30: Leading The Assault (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 31: Leading The Assault (4) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 32: A War At Sea (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 33: A War At Sea (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 34: A War At Sea (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 35: Overwhelmed (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 36: Overwhelmed (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 37: Overwhelmed (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 38: Overwhelmed (4) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 39: Overwhelmed (5) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 40: The Weeping Willow (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 41: The Weeping Willow (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 42: The Weeping Willow (3) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 43: Victory And Defeat (1) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 44: Victory And Defeat (2) ago
Book 10: All Hail The Allfather || Chapter 45: Victory And Defeat (3) ago
End of Book 10 & Author's Thoughts ago
Book 11: Illusions || Chapter 1: I Loved You (1) ago
Book 11: Illusions || Chapter 2: The Most Powerful Force (1) ago
Book 11: Illusions || Chapter 3: The Most Powerful Force (2) ago
Book 11: Illusions || Chapter 4: The Most Powerful Force (3) ago
Book 11: Illusions || Chapter 5: The Most Powerful Force (4) ago
Book 11: Illusions || Chapter 6: Underdogs (1) ago
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as nari
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Hello writer, aka Linodo

The first time I read ur story (this Story), is in the Other site. I hope U know what I mean.

But since i found Royalroad, around 2 months, I like read it in here.

In general I am not good bout grammar, so I can't score it in ur story. 

But overall story from the begining till book4, I like it. The first time i read it in my head I got a Question, Isn't it a fanfiction of the trylogy of DD?? But it isn't.

It a whole diferent story, but take the same power level.

Thats a good drama in there, Self conflict. The way U showed the protagonist is good. How u tell the perspective of a child, a lonely orphan child or of a children to try bounding they life as a family In other family, even the lazy way a child can became.

I like it, ever really love it, the story. I think u have a great prospect to be a profrssional writer, but its just my thought.

Oh, and I hope for the next story or the next book, u can tell Us the next level system after lv100, what in the story called Immortal.

Hope u read it.

Thank u

 

-Its my 1st review, so IDK the way i wrote it is right or not, so if any mistake u see in here, pls bear with it

--I know, My grmmar is Sh##, an once again I am Sorry.

manfin
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Personally, it is my current favorite novel 

OrderedChaos
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Its sloooooooooooooooow.

The author has addressed it themselves but it is a slow burn type of novel. For people who can't take things being super slow, you may not enjoy this novel. However, i'm a huge fan of slow burn esque novels(the only time slow burn does not pay off, imo, is when there is no payoff/climax). What's great about this novel is that while in general climaxes are huge events that come from conflicts, instead the climaxes come as "Lessons Learned" or show growth in mindset. I've been reading too many action novels and i've forgotten that climaxes come in other forms. Anyways, good worldbuilding, characters are not too shallow(pls avoid what Douluo dalu does or any CN novel for that matter and keep characters "alive"), interactions are great and background plot is nice to have. If you have read Ze Tian Ji or Way of Choices, then this one is a must read for you(minus the "profound" feeling but imo, the author hasn't had little chance to do something like that).

Saifullah Sani
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This is my first review so please forgive me if there is some mistake.

What i like in this story is not a blind fighting from the begining and un natural and un realistic main charactor.

Main chractor has a realistc personality and there is a solid story.

One thing i hope that story will not end when main chractor asend to Imortal Ralm. 

Galm
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 No out of the blue, insanely op mc nor paper thin characters! This is a really good, slow pace story. Head and shoulders above the average on rrl.

WorstNameEver
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On par with the legendary Xianxia's

INTRODUCTION - Book 10, Chapter 7 (~ 470)

Spirit Immortal is an Eastern Fantasy story of the Xianxia genre ("Immortal" Fantasy) that has been ongoing for almost a year and a half. With consistent daily updates; a slow but thorough progression of story, it is clear that this story has been well planned by the author in its entireity. 

The story itself has a decently unique/interesting beginning and the cultivation system is based off the Martial Spirit-100 levels system of the Douluo Dalu (Soul Land)/Legend of the Dragon King series. The author admitted this in one of the first authors notes (end of Volume occurance). 

Now, it is time to get in-depth into this advamced review (I don't do many advanced reviews so I tend to do properly these days).

 

STYLE - 4/5

The style of the story is great for this kind of story. While some complain about how slow the story is, it is easy to see the amount of effort that Linodo (the author) has put into making this world truly alive. Every little detail has been thought of and the world is truly immersive. 

The fight-scene writing is just as good, less detailed when it needs to be but also has any details that are necessary. The fights themselve are very much a standout feature so far. Although fighting is something less common in this story compared to other Xianxia's, when it is done, it is done incredibly well. You can see the how way people fight has been influenced by their personalities. Shin, the main character, is an incredibly intelligent fighter that uses his strong comprehensive and perceptive abilities to find and exploit any weakness of an opponents fighting style. 

 

Story - 4.5/5

The story is something that is either loved or hated I have noticed. Personally, I absolutely love it and am perfectly fine dealing with how slow it can sometimes be.

The story is done incredibly well. You can tell that while it seems to be a story of Shin's journey, it is also about the story of the world. Events within the story have repercussions for the whole world or the area that the events happened within.

A thing that I really enjoy but am not sure where to put it is the Martial Spirit system. While I have never been a Douluo Dalu fan, I really enjoy the martial spirit's of the story. Although there are only singular martial spirits that are determined at birth (exceptions to second rule are possible), it is easy to see how even the seemingly weakest martial spirit I have seen in the story (Junius' one tbh) can be dangerous to anyone if it is used correctly.

 

GRAMMAR - 5/5

Very little to no grammatical mistakes within this story. Nothing more to say here.

 

CHARACTER - 4.5/5

Ahh characters, another hotly debated thing by many. Let's all admit it, everyone at some point has doubted/disliked Shin's character and his development be it mental, path or even fighting style. We all have disliked him for some reason at some point in the story. However, looking back, I am glad he went through those changes and the development he did. As the author has stated several times, each event and change was necessary to make Shin who he is at this point, a dominant and likely invincible existence at his current cultivation realm (especially now hee hee).

While some still complain about Shin, I have a strong level of admiration for Linodo's ability to plan such an intricate character development and such a deep cast of characters. Not only that, but the sacrifice made early on in the story just to further character development and the long-term of the story instead of the short-term is a hard choice but was one that Linodo made without hesitation.

 

OVERALL - 4.75/5

Overall, Spirit Immortal is an amazong journey that will immerse you in Shin's story, no, the story of the world. I admit to having cried, laughed, gotten angry and even snorted during reading this story. 

It is a story that is on par with the legendary Xianxia like Coiling Dragon, Way of Choices and Er Gen's works yet maintains its own style and individuality.

It is definitely worth a read and the quality is easily among the top 10 of Royal Road.

 

Tanhalevi
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Very good (volume 1 just finished)

Realistic and likeable characters.

 

It represents what could happen in a clan of war survivors: grudges are difficult to  forget, even when the other side is composed by kids who are thankful.

 

I'm totally gonna keep binge-reading.

Roxt
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There is a lot to like in this story. I'm looking forward to seeing more. Almost every chapter leaves me with that 'yay, theres more to read' feeling.

I've currently read through the first book, and had to force myself to pause and give a review.  The 46 chapters of the first book took me about four hours to read, thats a pretty good chunk of writing. There are currently 190+ chapters so another 12 or so hours of reading before I'm cought up... thats fairly awesome in my opinion.

Nostre38
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It could have been a great novel.

abando69's comment at Chapter 45 describe perfectly how I feel about this novel.

I feel you are bringing the story to where many others have been, and in not a good way. It's beyond stup1d, the last 5 chapters are mindblowingly dumb, the second elder thinking capacity is that of a 2 year old and there is faulty logic constantly in this going out plot. First, if the first elder is monitoring the second elder and his entourage, then why is Bates able to move freely if he is clearly a subordinate of 2nd elder. Second, if the second elder wants the kid killed, he doesn't send Frie clan ppl, because when it is investigated it will surely be found out, logs about whereabouts, asking people...he should contact third party assassins. Third, you are concentrating so much in bringing in people from the clan to light that you are forgetting about the world, so right now we don't know a single bit, we haven't been informed of any other players in the game so right now, it's not really a story with different threads and people with different interests it's just a clan that works pretty bad and their dumb hundreds of years old cultivators.

4. It has been mentioned before, but, instructor actions are dumb beyond conscience, he could just hit both guys on the back of the head to knock them out and be done with them, then bring them back for questioning.

5. The whole second elder plot feels forced and without much thought where you should be developing towards a whole clan fighting against the world, a united front formed from family bonds and mutual trust fighting vs adversity and vying for power and resources, showing us the outside world in all its fantastical glory and trying to develop your characters in real situations with really thought out actions on their parts that match their character, and progressing along, learning their lessons, etc you are just showing off their powers in mindless situations and without much thought with what is happening in the situation. I understand you are devoting a lot of your brain power to imagining the concepts, battles, powers, etc but, and a big BUT here, it's more important to have a worked out situation with real plot and story progression than a lot of imagination used then in stupd fights or stupid situations. I feel any person that reads this rationally will feel bad after reading those chapters because the story loses consistency and its logic.

Hundreds of years old spirit wielders with the experience that means, playing the game and living life like kids on steroids and with twitsted morals and justifications for their actions that make no sense within context isn't consistent with who they are and their age.

Anyways I know you have a lot more written right now than this and I write this here instead of on a rating because I don't feel the need to bump your fiction down, and it may've improved in later chapters but still wanted to get this to you.

 

I pray you not commit the same mistakes xianxia commonly comits, and you stay away from fatal cliches and shallow characters.

ex: killing from own clan plot,..

Furthermore exposition of your abilities in front of your ennemies. How dumb can you get...

Ageofreapers
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I thought it was good until the end of book 4. I hate how it went from being a healer to becoming just another MUST GET MORE POWER novel.