Man With a Mace

Man With a Mace

by ThatSneakyNEET

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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Life sucks, and then you die. And then it gets worse.

Pritchard was the only weeaboo at his Tennessee high school, and was little else, until the night before graduation. Just as he confesses to Sasha, the girl he's had a crush on for years, Pritchard dies in an act of God and finds himself in a fantastical new world with his crush, drawn into the service of the Dark Lord to purge all Good from the land.

Of course, now he's a goblin. And a cleric. And Sasha's a half-orc barbarian. And by "drawn into the service of the Dark Lord" I mean Sasha was, and Pritchard just happened to be pulled along by accident. Sasha's actually a bit of a bitch, and doesn't care if Pritchard rots in the sand mines or not.

But even for a goblin slave, things can get better. The Dark Lord was kind enough to give Pritchard a Hero Core, and Pritchard is nothing if not a minmaxing bastard.

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Give it a sho- swing...

This story isn't for everyone. My opinion of the story has changed with each chapter, and to be honest, i still don't really know what i am reading.

And since it is still pretty early on (ch6) i don't know whether that is a good or bad things.

I'm not really in the mood to go in depth right now (i know, lazy right?) but i can say this.

Just read it and see what you think of it yourself.

The grammar, premise and the author are good so i am sure you will be entertained.

Succes,

Souf