The Last Fire Mage In A Frozen World

The Last Fire Mage In A Frozen World

by Royalist

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When all cities fall, when all fire magicians die and when all hope dies, a new hope rises, a new fire mage rises and a new city rises. 

The Last Fire Mage defending The Last City and so he becomes The Last Hope.

But to do all that he has to find other survivors and build The Last City with a system called "City Management System."

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Need that plot armor huh

 I was on board and ready to ride this train until the whole "city management system"

It sounded cool until the confidence level dropped and it was decided that some basic plot armor AI was needed in order to protect the block of steel.