Modern Wishes

Modern Wishes

by Reid

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The name is Alexander Miller. I'm a highschool student that's only just getting by. My parents died when I was young, and now I'm left to defend my little brother, Zack Miller. All my life, it was a lonely and boring world with nothing but repetitiveness. I would get up, make breakfast, serve breakfast to my brother, eat breakfast, get to school, get bullied by the school bullies, and then go to my classes where I'm picked on further. Most of the teachers have been bribed by the guy, since his parents are the filthy rich owners of the Vortex Research company, a company that has made this era thrive with new medicine, new issues of theft, and more.

The only time I'm not bullied is when my gym and math teacher Mr. Jacobs is around. He's helped me more than I can thank him for, and this just goes further when it happened. It was a sunny day, the sky was clear and blue, and everything seemed to be normal.

However, I don't think a voice in my head, telling me that I have 5 wishes is normal. Is that normal? Maybe for some people.

Hey guys, Reid here. I can't thank Karakazz enough for his actions and helping me in the past.

However, this fiction will be completely by me, as I try to get better at writing. I will be re-writing the first few chapters if I believe I did it better in the future.

For now, enjoy a fiction set in 2043, Canada.



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