Moving Fortress In Another World

Moving Fortress In Another World

by Cursedlife

Was it luck or fate that called him to another world?

Marian Set, in-game name "Ehko" was just minding his own business buying groceries when suddenly the store he was in was robbed.

As he tried to remain calm and assess the situation, his phone vibrated with a notification for the game he was playing "Idle Fortress" in which he was a top 25 player.

Before he could plead for his life, he was shot in the back of the head.

Unexpectedly, a woman's voice said some incomprehensible words as he blacked out.

Upon awakening, he finds himself in the presence of a Goddess, who wishes for him to be a champion under her banner.

His mission: Travel the world and show the humans a better path instead of enslaving other races.

How can he be expected to do this? The goddess has granted him both his own equipment from the game and the 20 elite followers he originally made.

Just because he's on a mission, doesn't mean he won't get to travel the world having fun!

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A truly Cursed Life.

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Well done Good Sir/Ma'am/Apache Helicopter

Well it seems to be well written so far. The Grammar and sentence structure is also quite good(and spelling, very important that.) The story has a good plot(Inspired by Overlord? Can't blame you really if it, as it is a great show.)