Spade : AfterLife

Spade : AfterLife

by Putera Mizane

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2018, Nodochi's friend, Dell felt strange that Nodochi dissappeared without a notice. Nodochi's parent also don't know where Nodochi went or what happen to him. Nodochi's first childhood friend, Ashley Fionna who also close to Dell worried about Nodochi because it's been 2 months since Nodochi din't attend to school. Dell planning to play the game with Ashley to test if it's a real VR game. After Ashley and Dell fill in the detail information in Era Orbit Online, they computer got glitched and they feel like their body getting sucked by the computer. Once they open their eyes again, A pure green colour grass, many wild animals near them are moving like a real world. Can they find Nodochi in this game or they just wasted their live just to complete this game?

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