Overmind - The Metamorphosis

Overmind - The Metamorphosis

by GiantIsopod

What would you do if you were to turn into a character in the game?

After seventy years of devoting his time into a game Dungeons&Beyond,

Don finds himself as a character in the game in his own world!

Read more to find out!


Release Schedule: (May change in the future)

A chapter will be released on every sunday, one per week.

 

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TheSwicky
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Very good so far! looking forward to more so I can give it a better rating.

BoredBeyondBelief
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The mc is pretty op when you first see him, but afterwards you soon realise he is simply quite strong compared to other gods.

Of course its expected for a god to be stronger than mortals and immortals but i find this rather interesting.

The grammar as far as I can notice is decent

The characters are interesting but also pretty confusing at the same time

The story idea is good but also somewhat illogical

I don't understand style score but I assume its reading layout which is probably a 5-6/10