I Can Hear Your Thoughts, but it's not like I'm Telling You or Anything!

I Can Hear Your Thoughts, but it's not like I'm Telling You or Anything!

by James K

''I can hear people’s thoughts without them having the slightest clue about it. And my goal to achieve in these 3 years of high school: Get rid of this ability until my graduation.''

The story begins with Yanagisawa Taichi as a freshman at Sakudai High, right before the entrance ceremony. He gets to meet a lot of people within and outside school; the seemingly overly serious and idolized class president, the constantly unpredictable and ruthless risk-taker, the twins no one can tell apart, the teacher that has given up on trying to find a spouse, and many more, yet no one seems to suspect his ability to read people's thoughts.

Will he be able to keep it a secret? Is he really the only one with this bizarre ability? What's the reason of its existence?

Everything will be answered in this light-hearted and comedic story that follows Taichi throughout his high school years as he struggles to cope with his ability to balance it and a normal teenager's life.

 

NOTE: This fiction contains Japanese honorifics, so make sure you're a bit acquainted with them to fully grasp their meanings within the story!

 

Also posting this on honeyfeed.fm

  • Overall Score
  • Style Score
  • Story Score
  • Grammar Score
  • Character Score
  • Total Views :
  • 13,248
  • Average Views :
  • 946
  • Followers :
  • 35
  • Favorites :
  • 5
  • Ratings :
  • 10
  • Pages :
  • 259
Advertisement
Remove
Go to Table of Contents
Rate it
Fiction breaking rules? Report
Advertisement
Remove
Author
James K

James K

Achievements
Word Count (7)
10,000 Views
Top List #2500
Group Leader (III)
4th Anniversary
Advertisement
Remove

Leave a review

drakan_glasses BE NICE! Fair critique is fair, but be respectful & follow the review rules. There will be no mercy.
Reviews
Sort by:
BoredBeyondBelief
Overall

Story isn't bad just a little disinteresting, I think it would be rather nice if the story turned a little dark.

Thjazi
Overall

Slice of life with psychic (or delusional) parts

I enjoy slice of life novels.  This high school age story is quite well done.  The text flows well with few to no errors. I have yet to hit moments where I felt characters had jumped their ruts, but it's still early in the story. I would be happy if I had bought a book containing this story in a store.  

Much appreciated Mr Author!

Dragonightmare
Overall
Style
Story
Grammar
Character

Even though this is ch 1 i already like this story it has a nice sense of humor good p acing and the main charector sofar seems like a decent person (which i can't say for most light n web novel charectors i am intrested to see how his school life progreses and what kind of charectors he wi;; meet and i really like the idea hearing someones thoughts in a slice of life format makes it so you can really understand the charectors though i will say this if the charectors are not done well in this kinda story it can ruin it so be careful