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What happens when the strongest beings in the universe set about to fight a toymaker from Earth? 

I bet you're thinking I'm an idiot for even asking that...obviously they'd just point their super advanced weaponry at him and incinerate his bones.

WRONG!!!

I can't give any more details though, don't want to spoil anything. 

 


 

I read/review on a seperate account. Seriously though, this is strictly for fun. I plan to keep to a semi regular schedule, but I won't make promises. Promises make people mad. Mad people have less fun. So read and be happy friends!

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