More Than Numbers

More Than Numbers

by vincentleyne

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

A boy named Asher Wright after dropping out of school for four years decides to start into a gaming career. Abandoned at a young age he was taken in by a man named Chris Jennings who tries his best to act like a father along with working full time at his bar. Asher one day while online finds a game that is full dive and decides to jump in head first. There are a few bugs in the game, but nothing major that is until someone winds up dead. It's common knowledge games can't really kill you, but supposedly there is a person in the gaming realm who can. Asher wants nothing to do with the murders until one of his online friends becomes victim and is found dead in LA. The murderer has a unknown method of killing as well as an unknown identity. How can Asher expect to capture the serial killer when the only clue he has is that the serial killer players a game with him that more than 1 billion people use every day?

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